+1 better

AWESOME! U are really did good job.

+1 At the same time, it will help you to improve your writing style, someday you will want to write a harem, and you already have experience.

Daphne Greengrass ,Fleur Delacour, Luna Lovegood , best choice I think:))))

Too many systems - the author, I hope you will correct this in the future, that it is not the chapter, then his skills and half of the chapter is occupied by the system

Come to me 1x1! I'll shake your hand Cultured person !!!!!

Author, I hope OC / Daphne - OC /any but not Hermione please, there are too many fanfiction with Hermione.

dropped?

The author, the chapter is now really better than before, there are no sayans and systems. Good job!

Arceus UwU

The author, everything is fine, but I ask you to highlight the text that the character says - to write it in a new paragraph or somehow differently, but it’s very difficult to read. Ft. Google translate

This is the first time I am writing a review, but the work is done well, there is nothing to say and add, while there are only a few chapters here, and it is not clear whether it needs to be changed and corrected, criticized and so on or not, but if everything goes the same, then the story will really turn out to be the best that I have read! Thank you for your work, author-sama! Using translator for this!

Like it! Thx for this! really good

Shizuka-Saeko and necromancery

AUTHOR! MY TEA! I SPILLED IT!

Don't make him a grandmaster's apprentice, otherwise it's such a cliché

I call in police dude...

Author..... The author simply changed the name of MC from the novel Sign in from naruto. And he presents it as his work, as he insults those who say that it is a copy :)) I think he needs to go to the hospital? So you are just rubbish author

Author-sama stop! my brain is overloaded !!

Well, author, you can drop it, with that kind of attitude towards this fanfic, when you leave it because of idiots, I don't think you will go very far in writing this fanfic. To write 19 chapters, for the sake of: Another stupid comment and I'll drop it !! Boo, could you not write at all? Focus on your core fanfiction. Good luck