UPDATE HEY

moreee

what do you mean by that?

AHHH BEAST TAMING LETSGO

ok that explains it

Honestly I kinda like it (except all the things I said about it), willing to be an editor for the Author if he/she decided to rewrite the story.

there are glaring plotholes and the system is not utilized efficiently. The MC forgets to consider many things in his life like his siblings ghat he doesnt usually see. The MC kinda lacks intelligence because he can do so much with the system. Also the system is too omnipotent, author should add a limiting factor which the MC should consider for his actions, basically giving the character introspection.

where are you now uwu