YEEPig

Thanks for the Chapter

So far, pretty amazing! I love the premise of a first person book and how the main character doesn't talent, but we all know that the main character does have talent (we just don't know when it will appear.) I don't know mucj but about the world background but the character design is pretty 'un mature, kid-like, naive." I don't know. Maybe the main character will grow.

Grandma NOO!

This book is actually really good. The book has an unique background that has some similarities with other books but the 'virus' part makes it stand out. Though, you update too slow

Writing Quality is meh, just a few mistakes here and there. Everyone has that problem. Stability of Updates... I have seen many comments of screwing up people's privildges but otherwise than that, I think its not too bad. Story Development is pretty good, I can see how the story progresses and how the main character gets stronger by the chapter. Although, I don't like how slow the main character gets stronger but thats just based off my preference. Character design is not bad. He seems courageous but at the same time, slightly calculative. World background is not too bad. It slightly stands out compared to other webnovel where there is more gods and blessing premise. So, In short its pretty good (if you ignore all those spam comments) Also, this is such a coincidence.

POG

:OOO

owo

Great! :3

Not bad, I like the character's personality and everything is pretty much above average in my standards. Though it does start a bit slow, things ick up the pace real quick