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Too many POV's. You already have a narrator just narrator 's POV or MC POV is enough, may be its just me but think about Movies and animes aren't they just TPP.
not my type, sry. FYI: It was "Seduce Kaguya mission".
It's a good read and I never wanted to comment but lost interest just like how I lost interest in the actual Black Clover series. At first it was the long explanation of his status on almost all the chapters and now it's flashbacks, both of which I don't like. pls note, this is just my opinion.
Good start, nice way of blending the world. I don't have much knowledge about Dark Souls, but it is quite intriguing. The only problem I felt was the use of "Oh Kami", it just destroys the flow of the story, as the rest are delivered in English and "Kami" is japanese. There is nothing wrong with using it, but as a reader I felt it disrupts the flow of the content as I read.
I'm sad knowing the potential of the story being ruined by idiotic concept.
I don't know why but lost interest after some chapters, given the name of the story it's synopsis and reviews, I thought it would be a interesting read 😔, may be it's just me. The writing is good, the start was captivating, but once the MC was introduced it was downhill for me, I don't know about others, MC unable to be in his body, alone made me not read further. Sorry, it's not my cup of tea.
why advanced system. Having a full living soul in your head will affect your psyche and cause your main personality to be not always decisive. like multiple personality .
why harem? it destroys men?
will the updates be regular