I like the story, but I would like it to describe hair color, eyes, height, skin color, etc. So that I can create a more realistic image in my imagination, while I am reading. I wish the story was not slow, but not so fast either, more or less that I end in 300 to 500, or if the story is too good, I don't mind having more than 2000 chapters. Perhaps, because he is a baby, you did not write the world too much, but when he leaves his home, unless the inheritance of the celestial, dragon and black jewel race gives him some information about ancient continents.

I like the story, maybe you should fix the problem of Tang Li Xue and the perfect copy of Tang Li Xue, but the most serious problem is the time when an episode came out, because in cultivation online there are 14 chapters a week, but here It only comes out 7 chapters a week, it's a difference, quite a big one, after a while, that's a big problem.