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Kaitlyn_Cats2yrCommented"desert buggy" huh? so hows he gonna get around in the snow when he goes out? theres no way hes gonna stay holed up during the blizzard
Magoo also evaluated the full range of requirements for traveling through the wilderness terrain, and had finally built such a powerful off-road desert buggy.- Kaitlyn_Cats2yrCommented
couldnt that be loopholed? just improve something by 15%, then when u improve it by that much, watch it again to improve it by another 15% and so on and so forth until you've improved it by 100% and maybe again and again til you've improved it by 200% or 300% etc etc
"It turns out that the 15% description of this excellent-quality item does not mean that there is a 15% chance that errors can be found and corrected. Rather, it means that the original process can be improved by 15%!!" - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrCommented
yep, these are truly "blood pumping battles" all were getting are just summaries of what happened, and i would barely even call it a summary its more like just skiipping to the end and not really explaining anything whatsoever.
Noah breathed out hard as they were kicked out of the Floor, his body feeling the enormous mental and physical strain, but the rewards that soon appeared in front of him rejuvenated him as he knew his hard work wasn't for waste. - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrCommented
"with blood-pumping battles and gorgeous skills appearing throughout." uh huh sure, the battles we've seen so far and the "gorgeous skills" that appeared were only talked about then skipped over, battles and skills alike, both mentioned then skipped. no details about how the battle goes. its just the two tanky guys rushed in and beat them up in no time. then for the skills its he got fire, and started blasting away and won the end. no such thing as "blood pumping battles" here and no such "gorgeous skills" either, youre lying when u say that. becuz u just skip the fighting.
As in any of my works, an overpowered main character can be expected, with blood-pumping battles and gorgeous skills appearing throughout. Some wonderful things I'm excited to put to paper is weaving the Multiverse of these stories together in the coming future, where ideally my 3rd or 4th work will be the inclusion of all the main characters we are coming across. In Infinite Mana, Noah Osmont obtains his own Cosmic Treasure after many hardships. In My Idle Gaming System, Noah Eckert will also have the chance to rise and obtain his own! - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to ChillCultivator
pretty sure the author wouldnt think that deeply about anything, youre giving way to much credit to the author. dumb your thought down to the logic of an 8 year old and then youll realize its pointless to wonder why.
There were thousands of Blessed within this airship, the large majority of them in the bronze rank as over 100 in the SILVER Rank were lined up neatly up front. Each of them wore armors and held weapons that matched their respective levels, these beings letting out powerful auras as on each of their armors, there was the inscription of a bloody crown being pierced at the center by a golden sword. - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrCommented
what was the first explosion?
This was because the explosion...was the beginning of a nightmare. - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to Kaitlyn_Cats
-its readable. but still clumsy. aside from all that, this is a really interesting book and ill continue to read it. its different from other similar writings on here. im not too far in but so far, i'd definitely recommend you read this. just if your from the west and english is your first language you'll have to just forgive the writing errors and such, since the writer seems to be eastern and english being a 2nd or 3rd language. still better and more readable than others
- Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to LtKaita
someone needs to replace the author then
RUMBLE! - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrCommented
this author is annoying always exaggerating a sentence or event after he just explained it. such as this one, she was unconscious and came to and now she "the 5th ethereal princess that was supposed to be dead opened her eyes!"
The 5th Ethereal Princess that was supposed to be dead had opened her eyes! - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to One_Boi
really? i got bronze immidiately.
Energy fluctuations wildly swirled around him as the color he gave off changed from the gray IRON to the stellar color of BRONZE. - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to qualcunoB
good job, the sarcasm went right over your forehead
[The first level in the Tower of Champions had 50 Iron Rank Undead that need to be cleared.] - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to Ghostlord_Epic
no its 100
[+215 Idle Exp][+585 Iron Rank Cores][+4 Blazing Armor][+7 Blazing Sword][+8 Frost Armor][+8 Frost Sword][+5 Frost Helm]+10 Verdant Shield][+6 Verdant Armor][+7 Verdant Spear][+15 Iron Rank Minotaur Shard][+20 Iron Rank Mammoth Shard][+24 Iron Rank Verdant Treant Shard][+1170 Iron Rank Unit Upgrade Crystals] - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to DeQuindrick
none hes got a planet in there that only knows how to have earthquakes and nothing else.
RUMBLE! - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to MikeN
no im pretty sure a kindergartener wouldnt even understand vitality and intelligence being "Iron"
'Very intuitive indeed…' - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to HalfX
this comment specifically made me think of Iron from Solo Leveling, which is the dumb summon
[Intelligence: Iron] - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to xFKratos
honestly, foreshadowing is nice, when its not this painfully obvious and wont happen as soon as it clearly will happen. i prefer foreshadowing that is subtle and only happens a bit more later on.
Her visit into Academy City this time was a mystery that many people would never find out about, but the consequences of her visit would be a match that would spark the birth of something that had yet to even enter the minds of the powerful beings of the Ethereal Realm. - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrCommented
so like, hes got peak iron rank blah blah blah, but like does he even know how to fight at all? sure having power is nice, but not being able to properly use it would be pointless.
This was the feeling of power that Peak Iron Rank gave him, his heart feeling excited when he thought about breaking through into the Bronze Rank. - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrCommented
i wonder if her thoughts would change if she could feel what it was like to not be awakened and how many people would let her be on their team. but she would have to be of average looks or not be added for her looks
When Annalise returned to their apartment at around 10 pm and saw her brother sleeping with a carefree smile still present on his face, anger bloomed on her cute face as she truly didn't know what to do with this brother of hers! - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrReplied to DaoistOfBeingHorny
hes been there for 3 weeks where are you seeing only 1 day? it literally said very clearly he arrived 3 weeks ago go back and read it. stupid
Noah had always been battling this horrible feeling and fear that was enhanced by the dangers of this Ethereal Realm, but at this moment, he felt like he could possible erase it! - Kaitlyn_Cats2yrCommented
this is stupid, he could have had done it there for 3 hours while they rested why not just sit there and go again after 3 hours?
Across the bustling streets of Academy City, Noah's figure could be seen flashing across as his face was filled with excitement!