'Bang, there goes her virginity. Crack, that was my heart.' I love this line I just laughed for rest of the chapter after reading it

I read a few chapters and oh boy it was good, only storywise though BECAUSE THE GRAMMER AND PUNCTUATIONS PUSHED ME TO THE BRINK OF INSANITY just one advice from a fellow writer, USE GRAMMERLY!!!

The more I read this novel the better it gets. this is like an emotional roller coaster that gets more and more better with each chapter. This is the first time I say this, This novel has left a mark on me. This novel made me want to tackle reality once again.

A shameless 5 star just for the symphosis. It was brutally honest and I like that very very much. The symphosis itself made me smile. ......

I would say that though the story is a bit confusing and a little boring at first the care and love given to the character development is very rare and detailed, even if we compare with originals. Though the story is slow, the laidbackness gives it a harmony between all elements There are a few grammatical errors here and there

The writer's style is awesome, the story flow is smooth, the character development is almost godlike, however, the SISSY character of the MC 😧😠 HAS RUINED THE NOVEL...😭 I ALMOST GOT A TRAUMA RELATED TO DANMACHI FANFICS as well as FANFICS in general. 😭 Warning to anyone who reads this: Read at your caution.

This is so well written. This chapter almost brought tears to my eyes. The feelings are shown with such writing dedication that it made me regret not picking this novel earlier.

Well, I would call this chapter TMUI(too much useless information).

Cloe +1^100

Finally... someone who understands

What an interesting intro... I think the intro itself was enough to show the writers determination and creativity... I'm looking forward the the next chapters alot more now

Just a sentence to say What wholesome skills.