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Yoekko

Yoekko

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2021-04-08 JoinedUnited States
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Posted

    This story is about the dangers of truckers around the world. I wish this was just fiction. but no, this is based on a true story. About a boy who has been hunted by trucks by a man for a majority of his life being summoned into a suspect world...

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    Behind The Wheel Of An Isekai Driver
    Fantasy · Yoekko
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Posted

    The first chapter was a good read, some of the dialogue felt a little off, but maybe it's because I'm conditioned to different styles of writing, not that it made me want to stop reading or ruined the immersion. The thought of an NPC breaking the boundaries of the code they were forced into is somewhat inspiring when you realize that we as people aren't too different. I also noticed some unanswered questions and plot points lingering in the story, so good luck finding those answers.

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    NPC Code: Red Riding Hood
    Fantasy Romance · kuhaku_sora
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Replied to kuhaku_sora

    I usually do describe sounds with words, but for this story, I cannot emphasize the sound of a truck blaring into ones enough, words weren't enough to satisfy me when I was producing this novel, though I'll heed your advice and let the mind of the reader have more freedom instead of guiding their thoughts myself.

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    Behind The Wheel Of An Isekai Driver
    Fantasy · Yoekko
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Commented

    Joe Biden leveling his taming skills be like:

    Who would decline such an offer when the game itself rewarded real-time money to players? They can cash in their checks, earn, and live inside the game. It even reached the government, where presidential elections were all held inside the fantasy world.
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    NPC Code: Red Riding Hood
    Fantasy Romance · kuhaku_sora
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Commented

    The human population hasn't grown for 100+ years? Makes me wonder about what the government of the future is up to...

    In the year 2140, a popular game called "Code" emerged and stormed the entire world. Everyone came rushing to the store and bought the newest edition of the Holographic Reality, or HR. The company noted four billion people out of seven billion owned the game.
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    NPC Code: Red Riding Hood
    Fantasy Romance · kuhaku_sora
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Posted

    I could explain how the story is charming, interesting, and well-paced, but you could also read it for yourself and experience first hand. If you have free time make sure to give it a read.

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    Fading Scars: Scars Of The Past
    Teen · CodeyVanilla
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Posted

    The cover of the novel looks great. I enjoy the premise of leveling in novels although I rarely do it myself, it sets a clear and decisive goal for the Mc and company to achieve.

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    Grandmaster Of All Job Class
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Posted

    The fight scenes in this novel in explicable and paints a vivd image in your mind. The characters are are fun to read about and experience their journey alongside them. My tiny brain is having a hard time finding criticism. I'll be using this story for reference in my current - future novels.

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    I'm The Villain
    Fantasy · William_Pendragon
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Commented

    I like the world building so far.

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    I'm The Villain
    Fantasy · William_Pendragon
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Commented

    The man who'll send Issac Soren to a new world, do not forget this name.

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    I'm The Villain
    Fantasy · William_Pendragon
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Commented

    The thickens plot

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    I'm The Villain
    Fantasy · William_Pendragon
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Commented

    Stop foreshadowing the double Isekai and give it to us already.

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    I'm The Villain
    Fantasy · William_Pendragon
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Commented

    "No thank you,"

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    I'm The Villain
    Fantasy · William_Pendragon
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Commented

    MC dies and then gets double isekaid.

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    I'm The Villain
    Fantasy · William_Pendragon
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Replied to Oran_Flutor

    Thank you very much for reading it, I'm glad I could make you laugh.

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    To Touch The Sky
    Fantasy · Yoekko
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Posted

    "You protect my half, I'll protect yours, til we meet again." Was a pretty hard hitting line, it foreshadows how good the rest of the story will be.

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    Entangled : The Heart Of A Warrior
    Contemporary Romance · Rayene_Blue
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Posted

    The first prologue gives a good idea of what the world is and where the characters will be going in the future. The writing is done well I only found one type but then again I might be the one in wrong. Emotions are portrayed well and the plot has been set in motion. I'll be sure to keep updating my reviews as I continue reading on.

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    Rise of the Divine Empire
    Fantasy · MadFool
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  • Yoekko
    Yoekko1yr
    Posted

    Just reviewing myself in an attempt to get my story out there; Anyways, I'll be doing a humble review of my own series thus far. The beginning is formatted in an iffy manner but the second chapter is done better. The author could do a better job in describing the emotions of his characters and the ambiance of the world.

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    To Touch The Sky
    Fantasy · Yoekko
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