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The story ended very abruptly. Author should’ve posted couple more chapters to give it a better flow and better ending. There are so many unanswered questions that could’ve been answered and then could’ve ended the story with their wedding. The culprits who tried to kill Hugo Zhen are not caught and there are so many loose ends left untied.
Abondoning and banishing Castor’s family for a crime that Castor committed is cruel. Phobos sense of justice is flawed.
What happened to Olivia is really bad and inhumane and no woman should ever go through it. But I guess she was not good fit for Gabe. He deserves an honest and better mate and hope he gets one.
She lied to him that she wasn’t with anyone before him and now poor Gabe finds out she’s been with two men and also has a child. That’s heartbreaking. Wonder why she lied so blatantly and now he’ll never know ☹️
The nurse told her that her parents and sister died and only she survived. Why is she talking about her sister all of a sudden. Doesn’t make any sense.
She is gamma it surprises that she doesn’t mind link anyone and alert them and doesn’t even fight. It’s unrealistic.
Author is extremely talented and has great story telling style. overall story and characterization is really good. her stories are getting better and better. Have read Feral Confessions, Silver Crescent Apha Prince and now reading Ileus the Dark Prince. the the books are very well written, gripping and very entertaining. there are some mistakes here and there but all in all anawesome writer. Hope you have a great future and become a very successful writer.
Why does she always makes the worst assumptions