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Forty_Seven

Forty_Seven

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2021-03-28 JoinedIndia
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  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Posted

    why is he not meeting his Girlfriend, is he ignoring her even after she had a miscarriage?

  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Replied to OwlishDelight

    If you read that novel, didn't you find difference in protagonist's personality?. What about family? was there a little sister in that novel? what about rational female characters? What about the power system? I will be using a well defined power system. so please don't drop the novel,you should follow later chapters to find out the difference.

  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Replied to OwlishDelight

    Well I did write in the comments that book is not an original idea. And this is not a copy. I'm changing the book in totally different direction. I don't like stupid protagonists, so it's impossible for me to copy that novel πŸ˜‚. If you check recent chapters, you will find out the difference. Thanks for the comment.

  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Posted

    This is my first attempt to write something like this. If you have any suggestions then you can mention them in comments. Book is inspired from one of the novels i read.

  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Replied to MiuNovels

    you should have mentioned that MC is stupid. I don't really like these type of MCs. At least Naive MC knows that he lacks experience but Stupid ones are the worst. They will always act as know-it-all, Author will also give them plot armour just to show how intelligent MC is. So it all comes down to Author's writing. PS - When i talk about being intelligent, i just want a normal MC, because on webnovel, intelligent MC = Normal IQ

  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Posted

    This is the first time i wrote something so please don't be harsh on me.

  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Replied to Forty_Seven

    I'm Sorry for using rude word. Sorry

  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Posted

    Are all author stupid these days? 1). how can he know so much about beginner tasks? ACC to author MC joined the game very late in last life, and he was in need of cash to save his mother. so why would he waste his time on information of early game tasks? and that too very specific (Like chests near mayor's house and all). 2). MC keeps on going for first clear one after another, why would game company ignore his gameplay? he is top player in their game so he should be monitored by company but NOPE. this is stupid that it stops me from reading it.

  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Replied to Forty_Seven

    I just don't understand that author invests so much time on writing these novels,why does he fail to use brain.

  • Forty_Seven
    Forty_Seven2 years ago
    Replied to Forty_Seven

    Day -3 :- NOW MC is backed by another shadow organisation And mercenary guild for some reason. who saved him from being assassinated 😢😢 while MC is totally ignorant of these events. why don't you apoint him as SON of fucking universe. Sigh he (MC/Author) calls AI as Grandpa Drax 😢😢🀭 sometimes I wonder if All the high ranking dudes who are saving for no reason wants him to suck their D##k bcz he is a Bimbo