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why is he not meeting his Girlfriend, is he ignoring her even after she had a miscarriage?
If you read that novel, didn't you find difference in protagonist's personality?. What about family? was there a little sister in that novel? what about rational female characters? What about the power system? I will be using a well defined power system. so please don't drop the novel,you should follow later chapters to find out the difference.
Well I did write in the comments that book is not an original idea. And this is not a copy. I'm changing the book in totally different direction. I don't like stupid protagonists, so it's impossible for me to copy that novel π. If you check recent chapters, you will find out the difference. Thanks for the comment.
This is my first attempt to write something like this. If you have any suggestions then you can mention them in comments. Book is inspired from one of the novels i read.
you should have mentioned that MC is stupid. I don't really like these type of MCs. At least Naive MC knows that he lacks experience but Stupid ones are the worst. They will always act as know-it-all, Author will also give them plot armour just to show how intelligent MC is. So it all comes down to Author's writing. PS - When i talk about being intelligent, i just want a normal MC, because on webnovel, intelligent MC = Normal IQ
This is the first time i wrote something so please don't be harsh on me.
I'm Sorry for using rude word. Sorry
Are all author stupid these days? 1). how can he know so much about beginner tasks? ACC to author MC joined the game very late in last life, and he was in need of cash to save his mother. so why would he waste his time on information of early game tasks? and that too very specific (Like chests near mayor's house and all). 2). MC keeps on going for first clear one after another, why would game company ignore his gameplay? he is top player in their game so he should be monitored by company but NOPE. this is stupid that it stops me from reading it.
I just don't understand that author invests so much time on writing these novels,why does he fail to use brain.
Day -3 :- NOW MC is backed by another shadow organisation And mercenary guild for some reason. who saved him from being assassinated πΆπΆ while MC is totally ignorant of these events. why don't you apoint him as SON of fucking universe. Sigh he (MC/Author) calls AI as Grandpa Drax πΆπΆπ€ sometimes I wonder if All the high ranking dudes who are saving for no reason wants him to suck their D##k bcz he is a Bimbo