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If you read that novel, didn't you find difference in protagonist's personality?. What about family? was there a little sister in that novel? what about rational female characters? What about the power system? I will be using a well defined power system. so please don't drop the novel,you should follow later chapters to find out the difference.
Well I did write in the comments that book is not an original idea. And this is not a copy. I'm changing the book in totally different direction. I don't like stupid protagonists, so it's impossible for me to copy that novel 😂. If you check recent chapters, you will find out the difference. Thanks for the comment.
you should have mentioned that MC is stupid. I don't really like these type of MCs. At least Naive MC knows that he lacks experience but Stupid ones are the worst. They will always act as know-it-all, Author will also give them plot armour just to show how intelligent MC is. So it all comes down to Author's writing. PS - When i talk about being intelligent, i just want a normal MC, because on webnovel, intelligent MC = Normal IQ
Are all author stupid these days? 1). how can he know so much about beginner tasks? ACC to author MC joined the game very late in last life, and he was in need of cash to save his mother. so why would he waste his time on information of early game tasks? and that too very specific (Like chests near mayor's house and all). 2). MC keeps on going for first clear one after another, why would game company ignore his gameplay? he is top player in their game so he should be monitored by company but NOPE. this is stupid that it stops me from reading it.
Day -3 :- NOW MC is backed by another shadow organisation And mercenary guild for some reason. who saved him from being assassinated 😶😶 while MC is totally ignorant of these events. why don't you apoint him as SON of fucking universe. Sigh he (MC/Author) calls AI as Grandpa Drax 😶😶🤭 sometimes I wonder if All the high ranking dudes who are saving for no reason wants him to suck their D##k bcz he is a Bimbo
😔😔 Totally disappointed as I went on to read chapter 24. where he was supposed to take advantage of future event to save mayor of city from vampires. But vampire was someone that has to be saved according to angel's prediction so he killed the mayor and then went on to say that he was here to save her(vampire) and he was killed by her 😂😂😂😂 then he went on to say NEVER AGAIN, NEVER AGAIN i will be so stupid 😂😂😂 and this dude is supposed to be from future 😂😂😂 Author oh Author 😂😂😂 just because you admitted that he is a fool for acting like that doesn't mean that it can help in character buildup. And what I can say is, Author will turn him into a ANTIHERO who will kill People for cliche reasons. After whole event Author tells us that MC is morally good but he ignores the part where he killed Mayor just because he wanted to save vampire girl. mayor was never considered as living person by him.
I don't know why this webnovel is ranked so high bcz it's not that good. Why? @chap20 1). reincarnated - time travel to past with all the knowledge of future events 2). Support - has the support of strongest being on earth that is his own brother, and his brother also knows about his time travel. 3). Angel who helped him time travel also predicts his future of second life and tells him what steps he has to take for success. So everything is pre-planned. 4). universal AI, who manages the game Sigma is also knows about him(remarks sent by AI) 5). he bought 7 devine auxiliary items on last day of Omega (bcz only divine items can be taken to Sigma), but they were not enough for him so Universal AI gave him 1000 of those bcz of some glitch hahahahhahaha (such a powerful AI had a glitch) 6). He got his first semi divne item on first day itself (Drax AI), and now he has tier-3 power while being tier-0 himself. 7). MC is simp for angel, bcz she saved him. NOT RESPECT or GRATITUDE but he wants to fuck her. #Horny Author 8). he killed tier-1 thief by jumping on him from tree and broke his backbone. (on the first day itself when he was lvl 1 (tier -0). 😂😂😂😂😂😂 9). he has Money, power, items, support from big brother, future knowledge, knows his own future, AND he has PLOT ARMOUR ............. WHATS THE POINT OF THE MC then?