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OI! I know stuff happens but this story is an absolute masterpiece in the making bro! Can't wait to see chapter 49 one of these days. I'll be waiting!
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Wow, that was very deep. I honestly like the interesting take on the subject and think this story could be quite interesting.
Yep, this is a shameless review because I am indeed shameless. I rate it 5 stars because this story is gonna be great one all the way through with endless development of the characters. Akai will never stop growing and he'll also stay the same. The character design really comes in during chapter 6 and the story will take off very soon. I upload every day and might miss a day every once in a while because I have school. The world building get better around mid-Arc 2. Trust me.
I actually really enjoyed this one. I can say that the world building is great from the start and I like the well timed comedy. The characters backstory was understandable and realistic and the writing quality was quite nice. I can't say much about character design because the story has just started so it makes sense that there isn't very much. My rating for the design will change over time and I'm sure that I will be raising that rating.
Wow, this chapter was awesome. I really liked the beginning and how you established the MC's personality. 9/10