Kind of a random question, but what would you think about uploading your old novel "overlord of kunoichi" to your pat.reon? It's one of the best stories I've read and it's completely gone from the internet (aside from russ. translations) from what I can see.

He did, then deleted it, only for it to be completely gone from anywhere you can look. :'(

My bad, it appears I am biased. Greco-Roman tradition labels Sphinx as female creatures. Egyptian appears to male.

I'm hoping you don't make Tsunade untrustworthy later on. That part really hurt reading in the original story.

I truly feel that Leonis has completely forgotten his mother. He never seemed to want revenge when he thought she was dead. He never acts as though he will heal her or anything. He found a truly wonderful family, only to give up on them. Even his green book seems more like a hobby than a goal.

Perhaps I've missed the obvious point, but I was thinking a griffin or some derivative: Chimera: Multiheaded; lion, goat, and snake; sometimes wings Lamassu: Man, bull, and eagle Manticore: Man, lion, scorpion; sometimes wings Minoan Genius: Lion and crocodile; lion sometimes replaced by hippo or donkey Sphinx: Woman, eagle, and lion

Absolutely incredible. One of the best stories I have read in a long, long time. The depth of the characters and the world in which they live is something beyond an amateur writer. I look forward to seeing more!

+1 Waifu.

+1

Hard to read. Even harder to understand how it has such good reviews. It lacks any sort of character planning and sense of development. Everything is just given to the mc, and even then the powers don't make sense.

Story started out strong, ended up faltering as it went on. Introduced random factors to maintain some semblance of motivation for mc's growth, and characters remain stagnant (except for powers) throughout novel. Interesting read at first, but I'll be dropping it now.