what is up with the names and changing how did the older brother change names and niw again the names change. it throws rhe readernoff

there character discription needs some work. cannot envision the character because of this. have no mental image of the surroundings. the story is good and develops at acceptable pace

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his nit coming on string he is a bulldozer

his not coming on strong he is a bulldozer

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