Dzima

The banishment seems more like an arbitrary plot point than a decision made from any line of thinking. All of the characters in the mc’s family are also all one dimensional it feels.

Take your time

Hugh jass. Bruh

Nah ain’t no way

Noooooooo

I would rate this story higher but there are a couple problems. The writing quality is a bit bad and would improve A lot by only putting it through a grammer checker. Another major problem is that it is almost a carbon copy of the Authers POV with some differences. It currently only has 30 chapters but i hope as the story goes on you make it more unique.

No but it Is a novel

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I like how the auther calls himself out lol

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