I am not really sure as to what exactly are you trying to point out. I began writing this story because I like the history of pre-islamic Persia and I wanted to imagine a world where it never ceased to exist. As to whether some people might find it offensive - yes, they might. But I don't really see this as my problem. Getting angry over a fictional novel seems like a waste of time and energy to me. If you read at least a bit, you'd realize that the whole novel is written in third person - that means from the perspective of a narrator. If you don't like my novel, don't read it. Simple as that.

I am not a Zoroastrian, I am a Christian. What I don't understand is why you felt the need to make this comment on a fictional novel. I simply don't understand.

I am not sure what you mean. The novel begins historically, but over the course of the story it becomes alt-history.

If a fictional novel offends you, you should perhaps rethink your "superiority."

I mean, I can try, but my graphic skills are close to zero.

I'm sorry for the delay, but I had to take a pause. I was swamped with my job and personal life, and I was feeling burn-out.

Yes, Khalid was definetly a general worthy of admiration. A great man he was, I am trying to show him as a great general in my book. But I can't possibly let him win every battle, can I?

No, no he isn't. This isn't a transmigrating novel. This is simply alternate history.

I do have some ideas to what to write after I finish this one. You can tell me your idea, but personally I suggest you to write your own book, since it is your idea.

Yeah I know, in the earlier chapter it's obnoxious, but it's not used as much in later chapters.

I am not well versed in the Arab language, so I don't know such details. Thank you for pointing it out.

To be fair, I have no idea. It will depend on my mood, but I'll try to write at least 1 per week, maybe more.

Thank you very much! I have already begun to write the first chapter, so it all depends on my time and mood. But I hope it'll be out soon.

To be fair, the outcome of this battle is literally in the first chapter. This isn't any foreshadowing.

It's just a misconception by the muslims. They think that.

Yes, I know about that issue. I myself had issues with it, so I try to write it more understandably.

Well, he isn't an inventor, nor is he a scientific genius. There may be some technological advancement, but it's not like he'll invent anything by himself.

Yes, The Immortals were an elite unit within the Persian army who were said to be immortal due to their numbers never diminishing under 10,000 men.

Working on another chapter right now!

Darigan were the Shahanshah's bodyguard, while The Immortals were a Persian elite unit. Not much to do with religion.