xmafian

I am not really sure as to what exactly are you trying to point out. I began writing this story because I like the history of pre-islamic Persia and I wanted to imagine a world where it never ceased to exist. As to whether some people might find it offensive - yes, they might. But I don't really see this as my problem. Getting angry over a fictional novel seems like a waste of time and energy to me. If you read at least a bit, you'd realize that the whole novel is written in third person - that means from the perspective of a narrator. If you don't like my novel, don't read it. Simple as that.

I am not a Zoroastrian, I am a Christian. What I don't understand is why you felt the need to make this comment on a fictional novel. I simply don't understand.

I am not sure what you mean. The novel begins historically, but over the course of the story it becomes alt-history.

If a fictional novel offends you, you should perhaps rethink your "superiority."

I mean, I can try, but my graphic skills are close to zero.

I'm sorry for the delay, but I had to take a pause. I was swamped with my job and personal life, and I was feeling burn-out.

Yes, Khalid was definetly a general worthy of admiration. A great man he was, I am trying to show him as a great general in my book. But I can't possibly let him win every battle, can I?

No, no he isn't. This isn't a transmigrating novel. This is simply alternate history.

I do have some ideas to what to write after I finish this one. You can tell me your idea, but personally I suggest you to write your own book, since it is your idea.

Yeah I know, in the earlier chapter it's obnoxious, but it's not used as much in later chapters.