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It's intreseting, can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the awesome work author.

Hummmm interesting story.... aa.

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Ok so, i like the story and its nice but can you please stop making Kawarimi a Thunder god jutsu beacuse its not and if it was do you think other ninja would not use it like that aswell and if it is that way then the thunder god jutsu AKA Minatos Kunai jutsu is totally useless like wtf?????

Correction, you can't say 'not sleep', but 'dont sleep'.

Hello Author here to give his totally biased review cuz why not. Hope u enjoy also for those looking for a Harem then this is NOT for you beacuse there will be no Romance whatsoever in it.

I like how you started the novel and i think it has potential and i think you should just keep it up beacuse i haven't seen much of these kinds of novels \fanfictions on Webnovel, and i think we need one.!