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I really enjoy this series! happy to see our MC get a mob for himself to command

Dang! Germans sure like their kinky stuff

dud you can make metal and concrete float on water, airpockets will most likely make the boat/raft more unstable

I think the book is good but it could be so much better! I love the game elements and how the author portrais the world. The story could seriously need some proof-reading and editing. Since there is alot of reoccuring words over and over again. Tip for author: Check grammar. Look for synonyms. Strive to improve and become even better!

lol upgrading the machinery gears to make it run better

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Thank you for providing free read! Gave you a sword for your savvyness! World building great! Sword fighting awesome! Hope to see more stuff like this!

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