Kernoel_77
Hey, I'm Kernoel77, 20 years old. I'm studying maths and physics (to be a teacher) at university rn, and in my spare time I write on webnovel, and sometimes I play videogames or DnD. Nice meeting you!
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Hahahahaha, you got my respect!
Just got to re-read the chapter and edited some stuff, especially about the City Lord's thing. The boy is now more of a jerk, and a young adult (22 rather than 17). Didn't change the interaction with the previous noble, because that one is a reference to Nazeem in Skyrim, an Npc who is very infamous for being a jerk. He repeated that Npc's lines almost one for one, so it's kind of an inside joke; hopefully that clears it up a bit more. Thanks for the criticism, I do take it seriously ^^
Should be gone within just a chapter or two. It's because he doesn't fully think of himself eith the new name every time yet, at least that's what I had intended. But again, Mercury only in the future ^^
Yes, of course, a very friendly fella
Now that's always the question, isn't it? xD
He's being too focused on what he could do in the far future, and not being careful enough with how he's progressing right now. Did I understand that correctly? I can see where you're coming from, I suppose, but he also has to focus on his current situation. If he had the time and space to optimally learn everything, that would be better, but he's also currently trapped and has to fight for his life every day. His environment isn't leaving him the room to advance slowly and carefully So without a teacher and being in this kind of place he's just making progress as well as he can, if that makes sense?
Those are very high physical stats compared to mental ones
The age of our lord, Dark Anthony!
My man Anthony just one hit a probable tier 7 demon. Holy moly.