Steve_Kidder

Thank you for continuing with writing this story. You really are a talented author.

I loved the supernatural reference .

I honestly think Quinn will still end up with Layla.

If the giant stone tablet can give abilities, maybe it can somehow take them away. It's a bit of a stretch but perhaps it could be used against Arthur as a last ditch measure in a fight.

Eventually , Quinn will probably end up in a romantic relationship . I agree that so far it seems far fetched because he has alot going on but the idea of having kids did come across his mind in the story . Layla , already being turned and having been through alot with Quinn , seemed liked an ideal match to me. I guess we'll just have to wait and see.

I'm hoping Quinn and Layla end up together .

I liked what I've read so far. I don't think the main character is necessarily a hero but it really made me think about what I would do if I were him.

The story itself was pretty good, alot of action and interesting characters. I thought that the main character, Stark, had some pretty interesting ways of dealing with situations he found himself in. It's a great story.

I'm reading your novel and it's awesome ! I'm looking forward to the rest of it.