so....I guess this story is not going to be updated....sad cos it is the best one.

This is turning out to be one epic story....hurry up and post MORE

so....you gonna continue this or not...3 months and nothing...I was enjoying it till you stopped so please continue. otherwise it is a good story so far

my dude....you drop this story and I'll drop you from a skyscraper. ..well in my head since I have no idea where you are...but it's the thought that counts.....seriously don't stop!!!!!

I was very sceptical of this at first but I am half way threw it and I can honestly say I love it so please and do mean PLEASE don't abandon this! No not everything is correct as to the original dbz but this is a fan-fic...no this is YOUR fan-fic so don't listen to though who critique it as from where I stand I like it...just please don't drop it please!!!!

love it so far....When's the next chapter...been 3 months now so I hope you are not gonna break your promise to not abandoned this. TBH I don't like yuri that much but the writing is good enough to keep me reading .

when you finish the book sell it on amazon and plz let me know cos I want to buy a copy!

yes YES! I love this story....the other book is ok but this one is the BEST!

THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!.....I almost gave up hope so thank you for updating this book!

ah....I was hoping for new chapters for your other book....

you said there would be new chapters on the first but nothing as yet

no chapters?

finally....you have no idea how hard it's been....

taking a break.....break is over get back to writing or this stays one star review!....harsh?...no! I am really tired of authors not finishing good works....seriously!

another great novel....that dies before it even got anywhere .....seriously can no one even finish a novel here....until this is updated it gets a one star

Hey are you gonna update this anytime soon...it is very good but I must admit I am getting very tired of half asked unfinished stories...plz update or at least tell us if you have dropped it so as not to waste our time...

OH I LIKE THIS!!! YES I DO! Please keep updating frequently and if continues like this then try getting it on amazon so I can officially buy it!!!

I understand your worries but you never know if you don't try....you got guaranteed sale right here with me but that is only one so yes it is a risk...if those who are truly fans here would do the same as me and buy it...yes it is nice reading it for free but I personally want to own it after....kinda like sampling it first...now that I know you can write good I would not hesitate to buy any book you sell on amazon from now on

ok you got me hooked on this book to....at this rate I'll never get any sleep ...if you ever manage to finish this book then sell it on amazon too cos I want both....seriously you are now my favourite author!

ok I admit....this book is good too but I like your other one more....plz think about publishing it on amazon so I can officially buy it....