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I agree, fella like as soon as the elf showed up he became a typical over chatty mc. Before hand he seemed to just do what he thought best and if people disagreed then oh well
While military arc just feels like it threw the tempo off
20 chapters in and still hasn’t used his special talent? The start is wayyyy too much world building and hardly any action.
The author here. Thoughts? Do tell me what you think in the reviews. Enjoy the book. This is for WSA, so I would appreciate power stones once that opens up. Have fun guys. Also, this will be a book where I take reader comments and feedback very seriously. So any suggestions are welcomed
So he doesn’t have a core? I thought the system repaired it
Thank you
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Was hoping Zion would be more ruthless towards the elves 😓
?? Really wasted the points on that?