Scyfer

No need to, After all this first chapter is your old "style" I'm sure it already improved much more in the recent chaps that I'm gonna read tho it will take a while.

It's an okay chapter but a bit rushing, no world building nor scenery narrative, at least for me. But hey, this is the very first chapter after all, making the readers want to read more.

Not really a big state then. But a large almost empty land.

Kung fu then

I see what it is, Unless the maids like the ugl- never mind.

But, hey, no judge.

I wonder how or to whom he get that much information. I mean, he is the youngest son of the Emperor Hao. People would eventually notice whether their prince has some sort of amnesia, asking where the hell he is, or what he should do.

I mean fat means healthy, right?

Don't worry about, because I know you won't.

It's very rare to find a book that implements philosophical reference, these days. Right after I noticed the title of the first volume, I instantly knew if it was based on a work of René Descartes. He was such a great philosopher indeed. As the synopsis says, "The crimson thread will begin to roll... casting its shades of gray." My guess this story would not lead into your typical good guy vs bad guy. No. It would become more complex than that. "Moral Dilemmas" as the author first mentioned in the 21st chapter, and the more chapters will be brought to us, the more it became blur and obscure. The border between evil and virtue will become vague. The MC really fit into this belief. A demon girl who is somehow contradicting to her born-nature. An angelic demon, you could say. But the thing is... not that simple. She seemingly has a helpful, kind-hearted manner, not because she is a demon on the outside and an angel on the inside, but because she thinks... simple as that. Then again, all of it are related to René Descartes works. You'd better read this story firsthand to comprehend what I mean. It's really worth it. As I really love the plot, the written narrative and characters description - from what the characters are doing, body language, behavior, their way of think and et cetera - are perfectly served, especially how the author put his/her own thoughts in some chapters. The grammar however, yet I can understand since the author isn't the native english speaker - so am I - nothing to complain. Despite a few mistakes, the story is still easy to understand. Then last but not least, the author seems worried about the low upload rate compare to other. Here's my little note for you, the author, "Don't compare yourself with others. There's no comparison between the sun and the moon. They shine when when it's their time." In conclusion, keep writing at your own pace, do it at a speed that is comfortable for you. I don't mind waiting a week or so for a single chapter because I know it will going to be ripe. A good chapter and a great story take time after all.