Sprite_Citrus

>:0 welp I guess i have to be the one to point out this speech similarity to very iconic authoritative rules throughout history... please dont burn all the books... i crave feed off those crappy harem stories ;(((

A really interesting novel, a little confused about the family tree though?. The story's flow would be easily improved through a couple of easy fixes in punctuation and grammar but these pale in comparison to thought-out world-building :). the only critique would be the overuse of "highness", it gets a little repetitive.

how about pleasure and pain >:D

definitely "science and technology" makes no sense the main outset of the play literally said people discovered teleporters. Since the moon landing our phones are literally more powerful than devices that sent men into orbit. i find it hard to believe tech companies won't find the commercial value of advertising and making these methods accessible for the public as silicon valley has done up till now

yeah, i agree although i think the idea that the army has acess to lethal martial arts like krav maga is promoted by pop culture. Khabib nurgamenov trained hand to hand combat during the soviet union alongside also becoming a Sambo champion. Aside from their experience his Sambo background was definitely the main influencer on his insane fucking track record.. this guy was an international Sambo champion before he did UFC. Im not ignoring the fact these are sports and that dirty techniques such punching for the throat or aiming for the eyes or oblique kicking their knees are not included in these sports, im simply arguing that the "lethal" techniques are much more accesible and logical than some people may think, its been exaggerated by myths and romanticism

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