This wasnt bad til 2 chapters ago but author ruined it. To ruin it this much you have to deliberately write bad. Bad is not enough. It was horrible horrible

Forced drama. Worst chapter ever

feeding ryushi the rumble rumble fruit would be crazy

High advanced armament haki is too much for someone like zephyr. He is not that strong. At max he is equal to high-top yonko commander

Better this way

thats why buggy got the highest potential. ma man eat it in one bite

yea but average logia is better than both. bcs both zoan and paramecia got many trash ones

Dude just dont stretch it more than it suppose to

I read at least 10 one piece fanfiction but this one is the worst. Dont recommend it. Dont let it deceive you to think its good bcs this got 4.8 rating. Its just like asura ratings

Author is just bad.

Bad. Its like fairytale for 7 years olds. Mc keeps saying human nature doesnt change blah blah but he just does the stupidiest thing possible

Tbh he is too weak to become evil.

Author nerfs mc too much. With all his one piece knowledge mc cant win against 40 years old weak uncles even after 8 years of hard work. So dont expect too much.

Great job auhor. You managed to ruin this in just 1 chapter. Keep nerfing him. 2 star max