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I like how you brought in real world martial arts and showed how lethal it could be with the mindset of a shinobi.
In one of the games Jiraya used a flame:release rasengan. Maybe suguru could copy it.
Reminds me of gabimaru ninpo
This is a great fight scene. The choreography was seriously skilled.
Sauce?
Sauce?
A complex phrase like that would be hard, but you could shorten it to “shingan” Shin=god/divine Gan=eye Or you could take notes out of Buddhism terminology and use “Tengantsū” Which would roughly mean the “divine eye that sees everything” Ten=heavenly/divine Gan=eye Tsū=to pass through/to understand. Although it’s a month late I hope it’s helpful. Also you should use AI bots to help like ChatGPT.