Mocha_Coffee

LET HIM COOK!!! also I love how you have been putting so much thought and planning into this, it's really nice to have authors like you that put so much effort into a story.

who is going to tell him?

Good luck! hang in there and don't join the countless graveyard of dropped books.

double... penetration...??

thanks for the chapter!

but wouldn't that be suspicious? the legendaries are basically deities so wouldn't they find it weird he has the space?

dayum 😶

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this is the best Naruto fan fic i have read by far! the writing quality is really good and the sentence structures are easy to understand! although the story pace might not be to some people taste, i don't mind reading through training arcs and don't mind the slow progression. It's nice to get a breath of fresh air after reading most naruto fan fics with either cheats or too fast progression. i also love the way to author-san structures the power system in this fan fic compared to others, it's not as complex and fits quite well even if the original Naruto series doesn't mention these types of power systems or techniques and their explanations. Overall I highly recommend this Naruto fan fic! also please don't drop author-san! I always read many fan fics and stories and it is always heartbreaking to see authors give up. do your best!

shots fired 🔥