Sooooo...the MC can move faster than the speed of light? Because that's how fast lasers travel. You might want to re-think this feat, chief. Because if he gets hit by anything slower than the speed of light, you're contradicting yourself. Change the weapon to a normal gun and just call them the Gun Brothers or whatever.

Don't delude yourself. 182cm is 5'11". You're not six foot, shorty.

You need a massive amount of Orks to make that psychic field. A single guy who isn't even fully Ork won't be able to do that technologically impossible stuff. He's also too clever for it to work - Ork technology works because Orks are dumb enough to think it'll work which makes it work. It's complicated but just know the MC can't do the same thing. The Warp doesn't exist in the MCU so the MC can't be a Psyker. That thing about the Catachan applying oil to themselves to become too slippery for things to hit them is a joke feat. I won't be using it. He's not a full-Ogryn, so he won't become like that with someone. Plus, that'd make him 100% loyal and subservient to some random person. I'm not going to do that to my protagonist.

Because he's not a full Ork, he can't build stuff in the same way the Orks in 40k do. But because of the partial-DNA, he does have instinctive information in his head. He just knows how to make shit and that shit actually makes sense, unlike most of the Orks weapons/machines. Put together with the intelligence boost from the Elder DNA, and he'll be able to make some funky stuff.

And he will. I just made him skinny for now because if he had Catachan/Ork/Ogryn hybrid muscles...well, he'd be able to easily sail through the Chitauri army. Would kinda ruin the suspense lol.

I mean, he's a super soldier and a weapons expert. No magic. He has four races making up his genetics and they are: -Catachan, a sub-race of Humans from a Death World (which is exactly what it's name is, a world of death,) and have evolved to be the ultimate survivors. Super instincts, strong bodies and an immune system on steroids. -Ork, a race of warriors who are insanely strong and durable, with a bloodlust and thirst for fighting to match their physical strength. Every battle/fight they win, they grow bigger, stronger and meaner (the MC will only grow stronger and a little bigger, however). They're also really hard to kill and any injury they get is usually easily healed. Short of incineration, Orks are pretty hard to kill for sure. Decapitation can do the job as well. -Eldar, a race of what are pretty much Space Elves. They're insanely quick and superhumanly dexterous with lightning fast reflexes. -Ogryn, another sub-race of Humanity, that evolved on a planet with very high-gravity. Which gives him even more strength, durability and stamina, making him insanely strong even though he's quite skinny right now. So, all together, he's insanely strong, insanely quick and he has Luke Cage bulletproof-level durability that will only grow from now on. He can also survives wounds and injuries that would kill a normal person and heal just fine from them. Hopefully this reply helped. If you want to know more, just look up their wiki pages on the Warhammer 40k Wiki.

Well, it might be overkill...but what isn't overkill when it comes from the 40k Universe? MC's gonna give the MCU a taste of how over the top the 40k Universe is lmao.

I don't know, man. Some weird cliche every hero has to have some horrid shit happen to them in their life.

Yep. What too much pussy does to a mother****er lmao.

Decently dark but not as over the top and grimdark as 40k.

Not directly, no. They'll know there's something unique with his DNA but they won't really be able to do anything with that information. So no cloning or any of that shit.

The MC will become a one-man army to make the One-Man Army himself, proud.

I mean, he can't translate his people's skill from 40k over to the MCU. Everyone in the 40k universe is an asshole of varying severity. No one in the 40k universe is a good guy. While in the MCU, there are definite good guys who have morals who are separate from the bad guys. So, I don't know what this 'true nature' of people you're talking about is. Plus, he won't be joining a team. But he will help out when it's needed. He's not a total dick, you know?

Bro, I'd only have to know there was a Tyranid horde on the way and I'd shit myself. 40k is scary as shit.

It is. Please help. Slaneesh keeps speaking to me at night.

New body and brain, plus his first life helping him stave off the hypnotism and brainwashing from the Imperium, has pretty much made him nigh-immune to the brainwashing. Parts of it will still show, however.

He's stronger than Cap, yeah. And he'll only get stronger.

I wouldn't call the other commenter a hater. He was just voicing his opinion about the chapter. No big deal. Anyway, thanks for the support.

Then do it yourself. It's not really that hard. Just use Grammarly - I'm pretty sure there's a free version on Google. Instead of writing something like (God: veins ticking ''Yes'') write it like this (God, his annoyance building with the soul in front of him, tersely replied, ''Yes.''). Do it like that and I guarantee you that your fanfic's quality will skyrocket. If you don't, you'll probably get quite a few complaints from readers who begin reading when there's more chapters. My only real complaint is the (*Insert name*: *Insert emotion/action and then insert dialogue after that*) method you've got going. It's weird and messes with the quality of your book massively.

There's only one big guy. And his name is jschlatt.