I liked the beginning, it's very captivating and pushes you to want to read more. I also liked how to described the characters so well there's no way your readers would mix them up and get confuse. I'm patiently awaiting other chapters. Weldone.

Goodness! The beginning was enough to captivate me, flawless, intriguing and your weiting style is soooooo beautiful, I coukd literally feel every emotions of the character. You're a great storyteller!

First of all, your title! I was intrigued by it. Your writing style is also unique, its different from what I'm used to in all honesty. I'm actually not a fan if sci fi but this is a lot more different. I love it! Weldone.

I loveeeeddd the storyline. Its a different style from what I'm used to. Also, your writing style is beautiful, nothing too ambiguous but still passes the message across. I can't wait to read other chapters .