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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula1yr
    Replied to The_Procrastinator

    is there a reason he is like that?

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    Bored Gamer in Other Worlds
    Fantasy · The_Procrastinator
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula1yr
    Posted

    author,i has been limited to free chapters, i want to continue but there is one thing that gets in the way, i don't like mc's attitude to xu min when dancing, mc looks like crazy and weird, i hate it, will the next chapter have something like that happen again? Please reply need a quick response (sorry for the haste)

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    Bored Gamer in Other Worlds
    Fantasy · The_Procrastinator
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula1yr
    Commented

    I have something to ask before reading, is he just a tank without damage?, if you want to protect his family I believe more if he becomes stronger than anyone else than just standing defense without attacking, my favorite motto is"the best defense is attack"

    Ch -1 Author Info
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    Redo: Grimoire System in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Ullyr
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Replied to LivingVoid

    so he lost the power he got from outside, then later he will gain strength by his own efforts. So, doesn't that mean all the story stuff before he lost and gained his own power was useless?

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    The Tale of the Void Emperor
    Fantasy · LivingVoid
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Posted

    hello writer, I want to read your story but in the synopsis there is a spoiler whose content is that there may be a tragedy later in the story, so I'm afraid to read it because I don't like stories that are too heavy. so if you see my review please reply and confirm whether there is a tragedy or not in the story so I can decide whether to read it or not

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    The Tale of the Void Emperor
    Fantasy · LivingVoid
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    Arrogance is okay but not by demeaning other people, there is only one reason someone demeans other people, namely he wants to be noticed, why does he want to be noticed? because according to him he has tried hard to be strong so he wants to get more attention, but a strong person is actually a person who doesn't need other people's attention, he knows enough that he is strong for himself (in my opinion)

    Ch 97 The Last Battle
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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    armor plots? what about the guardian alliance? does he think They allow such a thing to exist? they must be afraid and like their lives are not in their own hands

    Ch 94 Being Favoured
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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    doesn't mc's character change a little?, I still remember the chapter where he tortured the person who betrayed him, even after knowing the traitor wasn't completely wrong, but he still tortured him and said 'traitor is a traitor for whatever reason', but here the woman wants to be a traitor anyway but she forgave him

    Ch 398 Visiting Fragrant Tea Abode
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    Prime Originator
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    so why did he study cultivation? he wanted to combine mana and qi just to be able to become a cultivator who used spells? if that's the only thing he doesn't need to be tired of combining the two, just use magic to use spells. Give the author a clear goal, like he wants to use spells and weapons at the same time so he wants to combine qi and mana

    Ch 9 Ball of Light
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    Sage's Cultivation: Mage in Cultivation World
    Eastern · yohananmikhael
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    So mc treats humans like servants and cattle? I as a human don't deserve to read this story

    Ch 17 One Million Orcs. The Gods Are Dead.
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    Age of Gods: Thousand Folds System
    Sci-fi · Follower of Four Gods
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Replied to penuliskunpemula

    btw i already know this is just a translation but i just get annoyed when i see it, it's like playing someone else's life, how will he react if he is given a copy of his memory about his life but only half way, let him feel that he can't sleep because the future is uncertain

    Ch 168 Guildmaster! Update!
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    Super Dimensional Guild
    Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    the mc is starting to look like any other chinese novel mc, to him maybe it's funny and fun but for guild members it's life and death, he said he didn't upload a second copy of the memory because the plot hasn't arrived yet, yeah that's because it hasn't arrived at the plot given so that there is preparation for the future, it seems like mc still thinks that his guild members are just anime and entertainment

    Ch 168 Guildmaster! Update!
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    Super Dimensional Guild
    Anime & Comics · Takamiya_Shin
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    so he already know about dxd world or not?

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    Shadow Monarch: DxD
    Anime & Comics · ChaosOfDeity
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    when did he find out that the system was a solo leveling system?

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    Shadow Monarch: DxD
    Anime & Comics · ChaosOfDeity
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    after knowing the name of makeup,akeno,issei he still doesn't know where he lives? stupid or what?

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    Shadow Monarch: DxD
    Anime & Comics · ChaosOfDeity
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Replied to ChaosOfDeity

    not too long? how long do you think is not that long? 100 chapters?

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    Shadow Monarch: DxD
    Anime & Comics · ChaosOfDeity
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    where? it's been 2 days

    Ch 6 I'm back
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    Sword-Gramp in Orario
    Anime & Comics · Hassan_Gramp
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Replied to Vitrialia_Amermes

    It's not fun, if it's like a fun Chinese novel, there are all kinds of strengths and races

    Ch 7 See Through
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    Esper Harem in the Apocalypse
    Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    is he the only one who has the power?, what about the zombies, is there any power like that?

    Ch 7 See Through
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    Esper Harem in the Apocalypse
    Urban · NoWoRRyMaN
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  • penuliskunpemula
    penuliskunpemula2yr
    Commented

    author, can you make an army of monsters?, I didn't read the novel but from the comments I read it said there would be a war, so if you have an army it's cool, mc doesn't have to intervene mc can order his troops to advance

    Ch 17 Chapter 4 - Springtime (1)
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    My Isekai: I Had a Fun Life in a Fictional World with my Cheat Ability
    Others · Eromaru
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