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The comedic ideas ok the back could tell you that the author is trying his best. Nice plot with the broken system and constant evolution, the fact that he also didn't start as the most OP is great, and those defeats of him could tell you about it. Also, the most I like about these bull's are those saying that being stated by the author, and yap, sometimes he's on point, and sometimes, I think he just put it hilly billy...
Thanks for the chapter
Actually, if you read up to chapter five, you would find it boring or maybe, not much to see (But you have to read it for you to understand the story) but once you reached chapter is or seven up to nine, you would find it so interesting and carve for more. There are typos, yes, but it wasn't that big problem. Hahaha! Love it! The concept of having the main FL transliterated, while the second FL being reborn or whatever, was good. More Chaps.
If I remember correctly, not of I remember correctly, (misspelled)
Su Liya not Su Lita (Misspelled)
At maids maybe?
re-dressing than redressed
rather than "sat" maybe sitting also good. Your choice tho
Fufufufu Not many know that