Sayuri_KB
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9 months later, I still hope that you’ll one day bring us a new chapter.
How will they travel through the multiverse and aren’t they like only 5 year old.
What are they talking about?
So Ashina had another life’s memories like Naruto?
Didn’t you write in the first chapter that he had close friends
Who gave them these tags?
???
I’m sure you can make it work, you just have to make it so there’s some problems between Hinata an Ino, to make it more realistic because no woman would want to share their man, and then you make a situation where Hinata and Ino make up and accept to share Naruto
So he killed someone before, was it in the hyuga thing or in his past life.
You could just edit the first few chapters so instead of the mc reincarnating in yahiko body, he was always yahiko and after the attack, he got back the memories of his past life
So hes 4 years old and can already use a computer?
How old is he?
The rewrite is definitely better but personally, it would be cool if you could if you could reveal soon the backstory of the MC and the backstory of the body he is in(preferably in the next chapter).