This is just a first chapter and I can see that she is still a firm bad girl even if she grows up, in a good way of course. I would like to see more of this progress you made!

This sounds like a fantasy where a wizard teleports to Scotland after interrogation with the Woman detective, and in his current place, a Scottish girl accompanies him there. I wonder how that girl will do in the future? BTW it's not too bad, but the detective seems a little too cowardly

Dis seems legit