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Augustdsuza

Augustdsuza

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I'm a reader with a bunch of novel ideas which I'm going to write about. Feel free to drop an honest review. Insta: authoraugustdsuza

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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    First of all, the synopsis had me captivated. Grammar can be improved but it doesn't hinder the reading at all. The plot is intriguing and keeps you on your toes with curiosity about what happens next. Overall, great work Writer. Keep up the excellent work! Looking forward to the next chaps!

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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    Fabulous story. I believe that the synopsis could be improved a bit as it isn't immersive enough to catch immediate attention. The story itself is well-written and portrays emotions pretty strongly. The grammar aspect could be worked upon. And the main character appears to be a person of strong will, based on the chaps I have read. Overall, the story is interesting and impressive. Looking forward to new chaps!!!

    TILL I DIE IVY
    Urban · Jovialjune
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    The plot building is out of this world. The emotions of Cas are so well portrayed that I felt as if it was me. Excellent work Author. Looking forward to more chaps from you!!!

    Xternity: Eternal Gladiator
    Fantasy · Fauxflux
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    Albeit the short synopsis, it captures my attention almost immediately. The flow of the story is stunning. The fast-paced story made me feel many emotions in just a few chapters. The wrong summoning, the difference in opinion, everything is so well-written. Looking forward to reading more chaps!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!

    Master Of The Great Ball
    Fantasy · Magician_webnovel
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    It has an intriguing plot as well as character depth. The emotions are portrayed impeccably. I especially liked the out-of-norm take on the sci-fi world. The story is sentimental, immersive, and overall highly well-written. Looking forward to new Chaps!

    CrimsonWhite
    Fantasy · Audatic
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    Just from the synopsis, I know that this novel will make me cry. The heartache in the first chapter and the immersive language author has used *chef's kiss* The only thing I would like to be improved is grammar. Keep up the good work.!!! Looking forward to new chaps!!!

    His revenge on me
    Fantasy · shreya_ki
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    An amazingly well-written story with a non-cliche plot and a refreshing take on normalized fantasy novels. Personally, I liked how determined the main character is. He knows what he wants to do and achieves it perfectly. The only thing that I felt could need improvement is the description. Although it fits perfectly, it feels a bit lengthy. Otherwise, fabulous job by the author. Keep it up!!!

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    Fantasy · SupremeArchmage
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    The world-building is fabulous. I would like it if you start the first chapter in the middle of an action scene and then explain the background of the world. It would have more impact that way. The pacing and characters are admirable. I would like it if the pace picked up a little bit. Otherwise, fantastic job author!!!

    The Nascent Bloodline
    Sci-fi · Paul_Okito
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    The take on dual personality is both refreshing and amazing. The world plotting and depth are well-paced and maintained. Especially as the story progresses further, the plot unveils in a smooth yet satisfying way. Waiting for the new chapters. Worth the read!!!

    The Illusionist's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Malakai_Darkstar
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    The story has a lot of potential. First of all, I really loved the non-cliche take on the system novel. Although there are some similarities with Solo leveling, it isn't outright a copy of it. I loved how the author explained the situation and the MC's monologues are well-written. Recommended!!!

    I Also Level Up
    Anime & Comics · Mister_Overpowered
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    The synopsis and grammar need a brush-up. It doesn't do justice to your story. Your story has so much potential. The scenes need a bit of coherence and flow. Other than that, it's definitely worth a read. Keep up the good work dear!!!

    Consume the light
    Fantasy · goffyboy
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    I really loved the character Albrecht. He's so relatable. The grammar and flow are flawless. The cliffhangers are to die for. The author is terrific at monopolizing the feelings of the readers. Definitely worth a read!!!

    Arcadia— Heroes Of Relics
    Fantasy · DaisukiDayoSenpai
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Commented

    Way to go lad!!!

    "Lackluster? What's lackluster is your face." Albrecht retorted since he couldn't take it anymore. "If you're not kidding, then I'm taking my severance paycheck with me as per the contract. I'm not going to waste time begging you to keep me on this team. I wish you all the best in your next subjugation."
    Arcadia— Heroes Of Relics
    Fantasy · DaisukiDayoSenpai
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Commented

    I really hate it when they throw out someone just because they are weak. I'm rooting for you Albrecht. Give them a hard time when they come to you begging to take you back.

    "I'm out? What do you mean I'm out?" Albrecht couldn't comprehend the ridiculousness of their party leader's words. He was fairly certain that their leader was playing a joke on him, and yet there was a certain level of seriousness written on his face.
    Arcadia— Heroes Of Relics
    Fantasy · DaisukiDayoSenpai
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Posted

    I really liked the pacing of the story. And Esther is such a lovely character. Don't have anything to complain about. Loved everything. Eagerly waiting for more chapters.

    Esther: The King's Beloved
    History · Currer
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Replied to DaisukiDayoSenpai

    No, the cover belongs to the rightful owners.

    Love Blossoms on Cruises
    Urban · Augustdsuza
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Replied to DaisukiDayoSenpai

    Thank you so much for your time. Happy reading!

    Love Blossoms on Cruises
    Urban · Augustdsuza
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza1yr
    Replied to Te_ru

    Thank you for your time and generous offer. Actually, I'm a contracted author of this book. Please leave a review if you can. Thank you so much again for your kind thoughts.

    Ch 17 Annoying Neighbor
    Love Blossoms on Cruises
    Urban · Augustdsuza
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  • Augustdsuza
    Augustdsuza2yr
    Posted

    Hi there! This story is perfect for those looking for mystery romance thrill and suspense. If you want to read then you are in for a joyful ride. Hope you guys also enjoy it as much as I do.

    MY PAST, MY FUTURE BELONGS TO ME
    Teen · Augustdsuza
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