Augustdsuza
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First of all, the synopsis had me captivated. Grammar can be improved but it doesn't hinder the reading at all. The plot is intriguing and keeps you on your toes with curiosity about what happens next. Overall, great work Writer. Keep up the excellent work! Looking forward to the next chaps!
Fabulous story. I believe that the synopsis could be improved a bit as it isn't immersive enough to catch immediate attention. The story itself is well-written and portrays emotions pretty strongly. The grammar aspect could be worked upon. And the main character appears to be a person of strong will, based on the chaps I have read. Overall, the story is interesting and impressive. Looking forward to new chaps!!!
Albeit the short synopsis, it captures my attention almost immediately. The flow of the story is stunning. The fast-paced story made me feel many emotions in just a few chapters. The wrong summoning, the difference in opinion, everything is so well-written. Looking forward to reading more chaps!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!
An amazingly well-written story with a non-cliche plot and a refreshing take on normalized fantasy novels. Personally, I liked how determined the main character is. He knows what he wants to do and achieves it perfectly. The only thing that I felt could need improvement is the description. Although it fits perfectly, it feels a bit lengthy. Otherwise, fabulous job by the author. Keep it up!!!
The world-building is fabulous. I would like it if you start the first chapter in the middle of an action scene and then explain the background of the world. It would have more impact that way. The pacing and characters are admirable. I would like it if the pace picked up a little bit. Otherwise, fantastic job author!!!
Way to go lad!!!
I really hate it when they throw out someone just because they are weak. I'm rooting for you Albrecht. Give them a hard time when they come to you begging to take you back.