Fanatic_Gecko
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Rhymed go with go. What a legend.
Handsome eh?
Imagine that guy sitting on a bench and just making whale sounds.
Don't know, haven't tried yet.
Such rich vocabulary, makes me jealous... This is a engaging concept with interesting characters. This is a novel to be proud of! Keep up the good work!
The story is easy to follow. It is not hard to read, but there are a couple of spelling mistakes (might have been mixed by now). I like that the novel updates weekly. The time waiting isn't that long, but it's just enough to keep the tension. It also doesn't put too much stress on the writer and he can stay creative that way. The story progresses at a good pace. The end of each chapter always makes you wonder what will happen next. The characters are a bit plain. Sometimes it's hard to recognize the reasons why the character does a certain action. There are also a couple of times where the character says something that no one would ever say and that specific situation. The world where the story takes place doesn't get described that much, but enough to visualize something and that's really enough. Overall, the book is interesting.