The grammar sadly never gets better. it's this bad throughout the entire story. I had a migraine after I finished the book but I did enjoy the story to some point.

Dayum! This girl is way too savage.

What in the name of all things sane is going on? my confusion levels are currently skyrocketing rn

What's with the emphasis on snow white skin in all these books?

There's no dish as sweet as revenge and candied hawthorns

There are multiple errors pertaining to pronouns in the story. the story is well constructed though

Same. I was a bit confused at first but when I understood that it was a translation error, I just slotted the SHE in wherever HE appeared

😂😂 The hell? Thank the heavens I read the reviews first . I would have wasted all my coins and fast passes for no relevant reason

Thank you for the review Thank the heavens that I didn't waste my time reading this.

what in heaven's name is "what's magic" ?

Finally! I never dreamed that it would be adapted into a comic. I'm a mad fanatic for the novel I hope the comic meets the standard of rge novel. ❤❤❤

I am anticipating this book so much. pls release it as quickly as possible. I love the synopsis. it is so intriguing and I can't help but anticipate

What's wrong??

The book is actually good in terms of grammatical construction, world setting and story development but truth be told it's a little too heavy for me. This kind of book belongs in paperbacks where it would be greatly appreciated not on places like webnovels. it just won't move here as most of the readers prefer lighter toned books and the heavy ones that they can read always have a hint of romance or intense emotions.

The book is pretty good if you don't count the errors on the grammatical construction and the punctuation. It has a nice setting plus the protagonist is well designed. looking forward to reading more.

Awwn Thanks Will surely update more frequently. It's your reviews that keeps me motivated

Thanks 😊 I'm touched

The book itself is actually really nice. The character development or build is to the tee I love it. Update stability and world design are also top notch. The problem I have with the book is the grammatical construct. I forgot that English doesn't seem to be your first language or even if it is, people are not above mistakes. So what you can do right now is just to get an editor or a proofread editor to help me to check everything then adjust it.

your story has a unique touch to it. At first I was a bit sceptical because of the cover but once I read it, it blew my mind. This is where the saying that don't judge a book by its cover comes in.

awwn am so touched thank you will surely do