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CronosTaoist

CronosTaoist

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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    I don't understand why there are people who want to revive the mc's son, his system practically revolves around building an exercise for children to fight, what did you expect? It was obvious that it was just a matter of time.

    Ch 26 Chapter 26
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    I am the patriarch of Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Daoisttt
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    the system can literally copy everything, why doesn't it copy talents or memories? If he put together talents like Orochimaru, Tsunade, namikaze and other strong-talented people, that along with his own talent would help a lot.

    Ch 58 Chapter 58: The Power of Susanoo
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    Naruto: copy everything
    Anime & Comics · Khaled_Sellami
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    Wanted you to do Fuinjutsu for the sharigans of the uchiha clan, something similar to the Hyuga secondary clan's seal, to stop others from stealing the sharigans, it could be something like on the death of the seal's host or if he activates the seal by his own chakra the seal destroys chakra pathways and eye veins.

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    In Naruto: Reborn as an Uchiha
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    Why does the mc have a Fuinjutsu (sealing arts) for the uchiha sharigans, something like if the host dies or activates the seal by their own chakra, the activated seal would destroy the eye blood vessels and the chakra pathways of the uchiha eyes, thus blinding the sharingan would lessen other people's greed as well as protect the uchiha.

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    In Naruto: Reborn as an Uchiha
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Posted

    And really disappointing. The mc is a total simp, totally forced relationships and without any kind of construction, an example of this is one of the first cap that sona sitri appears out of nowhere at his house and we know that they liked each other, if it was to have some kind of relationship, I would prefer that had rebirth instead of transmigration to be able to build characters. Mc has a hatred for his father and his relatives that disappears as if it never existed. But the worst thing for me was the forced relationship he had with Aika, who to say from the interactions they had, she seemed more like a boring girl who keeps bothering the mc, but she, by the work of "destiny" discovers the supernatural and the mc wants to keep her with their memories because they are friends. hahahahaha

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    The Rebellious Son of Lucifer
    Anime & Comics · JOJO99
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    Very good, I hope you explore the world of Harry Potter more and don't stay in the same Hogwarts as usual, I liked that you use elements of Indian culture, you don't see that much. (google translate)

    Ch 17 Chapter 17. Gringotts Wizarding Bank
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    Wizarding world: Arc of Embodiment {Multiverse}
    Book&Literature · SORCERERSUPREME_7
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Posted

    Very good, I hope you explore the world of Harry Potter more and don't stay in the same Hogwarts as usual, I liked that you use elements of Indian culture, you don't see that much. (google translate)

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    Wizarding world: Arc of Embodiment {Multiverse}
    Book&Literature · SORCERERSUPREME_7
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter, I particularly prefer longer chapters or at least finish a fight in one or two well done chapters, even if I have to decrease the frequency of release. (google translate)

    Ch 14 A Man With A Dream pt 12
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    The Universe's Greatest Showman
    Anime & Comics · ForThe_Lolzs
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    They, mc and Wesley are only assimilating physical power and martial knowledge, or are they also assimilating Qi type, general knowledge, talents, soul strength and etc? (Google Translate)

    Ch 13 The Man With A Dream pt 11.5
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    The Universe's Greatest Showman
    Anime & Comics · ForThe_Lolzs
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    As he won't have devil fruit I was thinking, conqueror haki and basically a spirit attack so you could make him use it otherwise more as a bridge to communicate with sea kings to aid in battles or seagulls and other animals to have information of the 4 mates and the grand line in an easy way.

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    The Way Of Entertainment
    Anime & Comics · TheGehrmanSparrow
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    the mc can build an animal intelligence network, i mean he can literally turn a chicken into a raptor, i think it's easy for him to catch birds and transform into a super fast eagle good to hide and with enough intelligence level to always come back to him , and it in turn read your memory or something like that.

    Ch 14 Notice
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    Game of thrones: Dark sculptor
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Posted

    I find it kind of strange that Mc simply has to act "nice" to earn points in the system and it only gets worse when he basically takes Itachi's memories and his appearance, I know the system says that it doesn't affect his personality, but I just find it strange that he always You're going to have to act "nice" if you want to get stronger, it creates that distance from your real personality and a maid just to be "nice". Another thing I was seeing I saw that you wanted to create a multiverse story, I wanted you to have this planned from the beginning and to be able to choose a weaker world which in turn would make it available for him to explore more worlds, because like he's going to leave against gods very appealing to many worlds with potential to explore. (Google Translate)

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    Acting Cool System
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    I don't know how the mc is going to deal with war issues and the hidden villages, but it's going to be weird for him to just suckle his kids for war, I mean if it's realistic because we know that even if his kids get op fast enough to deal with them threats we have to remember that it is a world of ninjas at war often beyond that we saw little of how the world and society works behind the "canon" (google translate)

    Ch 7 Chapter 7
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    I am the patriarch of Naruto
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
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    Solo Leveling: Grimoire
    Anime & Comics · Esposible
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    I don't understand why he doesn't want to be a jack of all trades, I mean he's a "player" type as long as he has time to grow he can do everything besides he has talent increasing abilities. I would like to know the description of the stats I know it's kind of common sense but there's a lot of ff that treats Intelligence like mana increase and etc, no type of IQ increase. (google translate)

    Ch 21 Chapter 21 - One Year Training 02
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    The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.
    Anime & Comics · MonkWithAPen
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Replied to Hyuga_Tobirama

    I don't really like her either, at least at the moment, I think she's portrayed in a very cheerful, innocent and very annoying way at times, it just doesn't seem to match Severus' character. I know they carry a story but bro let's be honest that if Severus had a less abusive childhood and had childhood friendships, he wouldn't be so attached to a friendship with her his only friend. (google translate)

    Ch 38 37.Choice.
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    What if? Severus Snape.
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    It was good while it lasted, I particularly like mc with simple powers but with a lot of potential something like unlimited mental faculty which for me is one of the most op "powers" if used well. (Google Translate)

    Ch 64 Chapter 64
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    The Tale Of Loki
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Replied to Ryuu23

    They already had an idea apparently in the last chapters, as they received information about the existence of beings that do not exist in their original universe, even if they thought it was a different timeline or something it was a matter of time until they discovered the stories of their version in the dxd universe.

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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    If you continue like this, you only steal the "innocence" of some heroines to get rewards with a value greater than A.

    Ch 99 Chapter 99: A New Reward
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    Kaito Kid in the World of American Comics
    Anime & Comics · RainPalace
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  • CronosTaoist
    CronosTaoist2yr
    Commented

    you can do something like the sky bookstore that compiles the knowledge and improves it by removing bugs or updating them.

    Ch 190 Project Pangea (II)
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    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Book&Literature · LazySageDao
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