CronosTaoist
Long time reader First time writer
of reading
1988
Read books
Wanted you to do Fuinjutsu for the sharigans of the uchiha clan, something similar to the Hyuga secondary clan's seal, to stop others from stealing the sharigans, it could be something like on the death of the seal's host or if he activates the seal by his own chakra the seal destroys chakra pathways and eye veins.
Why does the mc have a Fuinjutsu (sealing arts) for the uchiha sharigans, something like if the host dies or activates the seal by their own chakra, the activated seal would destroy the eye blood vessels and the chakra pathways of the uchiha eyes, thus blinding the sharingan would lessen other people's greed as well as protect the uchiha.
And really disappointing. The mc is a total simp, totally forced relationships and without any kind of construction, an example of this is one of the first cap that sona sitri appears out of nowhere at his house and we know that they liked each other, if it was to have some kind of relationship, I would prefer that had rebirth instead of transmigration to be able to build characters. Mc has a hatred for his father and his relatives that disappears as if it never existed. But the worst thing for me was the forced relationship he had with Aika, who to say from the interactions they had, she seemed more like a boring girl who keeps bothering the mc, but she, by the work of "destiny" discovers the supernatural and the mc wants to keep her with their memories because they are friends. hahahahaha
As he won't have devil fruit I was thinking, conqueror haki and basically a spirit attack so you could make him use it otherwise more as a bridge to communicate with sea kings to aid in battles or seagulls and other animals to have information of the 4 mates and the grand line in an easy way.
the mc can build an animal intelligence network, i mean he can literally turn a chicken into a raptor, i think it's easy for him to catch birds and transform into a super fast eagle good to hide and with enough intelligence level to always come back to him , and it in turn read your memory or something like that.
I find it kind of strange that Mc simply has to act "nice" to earn points in the system and it only gets worse when he basically takes Itachi's memories and his appearance, I know the system says that it doesn't affect his personality, but I just find it strange that he always You're going to have to act "nice" if you want to get stronger, it creates that distance from your real personality and a maid just to be "nice". Another thing I was seeing I saw that you wanted to create a multiverse story, I wanted you to have this planned from the beginning and to be able to choose a weaker world which in turn would make it available for him to explore more worlds, because like he's going to leave against gods very appealing to many worlds with potential to explore. (Google Translate)
I don't know how the mc is going to deal with war issues and the hidden villages, but it's going to be weird for him to just suckle his kids for war, I mean if it's realistic because we know that even if his kids get op fast enough to deal with them threats we have to remember that it is a world of ninjas at war often beyond that we saw little of how the world and society works behind the "canon" (google translate)
I don't understand why he doesn't want to be a jack of all trades, I mean he's a "player" type as long as he has time to grow he can do everything besides he has talent increasing abilities. I would like to know the description of the stats I know it's kind of common sense but there's a lot of ff that treats Intelligence like mana increase and etc, no type of IQ increase. (google translate)
I don't really like her either, at least at the moment, I think she's portrayed in a very cheerful, innocent and very annoying way at times, it just doesn't seem to match Severus' character. I know they carry a story but bro let's be honest that if Severus had a less abusive childhood and had childhood friendships, he wouldn't be so attached to a friendship with her his only friend. (google translate)
They already had an idea apparently in the last chapters, as they received information about the existence of beings that do not exist in their original universe, even if they thought it was a different timeline or something it was a matter of time until they discovered the stories of their version in the dxd universe.