You really should get someone to proof read your work. The writing quality is quite bad.. It takes away the reading experience. Good story though. More mechanics needs to be explained. like dungeon tickets? Where did he get them? How does learning each skill from each element works? If its only 7, in 7 levels, you would learned all that you can given the limitations, so what happens when you're higher level? How many skill tiers are there? Etc. Etc. Needs more clarification. Keep it up! (:

I am never a fan of stories with unfair system advantages owned by only the MC which he then uses it to overpower everything. But somehow, this story manage to strike the right balance. There were some overpowered moments, but the opponents isn't excessively filled with the usual cliche tropes usually found in traditional system/xanxia stories. As the story expands, the system is used less and less, which is a nice change. It was a pleasant surprise to find that as the story develops, the characters develops an independence from the system (or they try to and succeeded in a way). They try ways to develop technologies that builds on what the system provides as opposed to having the system spoon feed them everything. In my opinion this gives the story more depth and weight. My only critique is the writing quality. There are erroneous spelling errors, punctuations, and grammatical mistakes that sometimes ruin the reading experience. The sentence structure and prose could be better as some sentences requires multiple rereads to understand what it's trying to convey. Tenses are all over the place and sometimes character switches gender (lol), referred to he, then she, then back to he. The quality got somewhat better after he got an editor, but a lot of errors still persist throughout the later chapters. Don't let the writing quality push you away from the story though. The story is still better written and have decent foreshadows than 90% of the top stories here on this platform. It is truly a hidden gem on WN. Give it a go. It delivers on what it promises. Could use more kingdom building, but that's just me being a sucker for a good sci-fi kingdom building. Cheers!

Hey! The reviews ain't kidding when they claim that this story is a hidden gem. I realised the writing quality have been a bit worse in the past few chapters. A lot of grammar and spelling mistakes and some sentences are really difficult to grasp. I cant figure out how to leave you a pm so here I am, offering to proof read the chapters (past, present and future) and help the future readers :D just a thought, to pick up a new hobby hehehe. Lmk if you're interested. :D PS, never done editing before but I really like the story and want to contribute (:

The spelling and grammar in this novel is quite horrible tbh lool

Im never a fan of locked chapters. I usually just go to boxnovel after encountering the locked chapters. If i really liked the story, i'll usually subscribe to the authors if their available on Patreon (like how most authors on RR survive i guess) The fees here are just too steep. Tho, it is your choice since you're the author. (: P.s. i'll probably go to boxnovel if the chapters are locked. But i'll make it up on Patreon for a month or two subscription heh~ if you're there 😅 Please don't hate me. I'm a poor student here tryna make ends meet

Someone has been reading nanomancer HAHAHA