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VasL

VasL

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Amateur writer looking for feedback on my works.

2021-02-05 JoinedGlobal
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Silver_Soverign

    Try out my other novel. Mage vs. Modern Society

    Ch 9 Interview and Medieval (I)
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Resingpixel

    No, I've been working on Mage vs. Modern Society this week. I'm also starting rewriting on my old book. I will release a chapter today or tomorrow

    Ch 25 Spidrid (II)
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Posted

    I really like it so far. Only thing I would change is the update speed. Good job author! I hope the story works out well and continues to update!

    I lead the Army of Darkness -Isekai story
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Aiman079

    I love this type of MC so I wrote one

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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Resingpixel

    I appreciate it!

    Ch 21 Conference (II)
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Resingpixel

    Hahaha! It's alright! I often spell words like that wrong.

    Ch 20 Sponsor
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Resingpixel

    I'm way better now!

    Ch 20 Sponsor
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to cane_casey

    Glad you like it!

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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Resingpixel

    I upload every two days but last week I was in the hospital.

    Stuck in a dungeon for 5000 years and acquiring unimaginable power
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to hmmyes

    Thanks for all the feedback

    Ch 3 Return
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to hmmyes

    Yes I realized that and fixed it later on

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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Enfield_1058

    Thanks

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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to LegendaryPoet

    sorry I've been super busy

    Ch 17 Preparation (I)
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Riassuba

    He shuts them down

    "Please party with us!" (In unison)
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Riassuba

    You don't like it?

    "Please party with us!" (In unison)
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Brandon_Foster

    Thanks

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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Waisyrr

    what

    Ch 10 Medieval (II)
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Commented

    I like it so far, but each line of dialog should have its own line. Concept Dialouge Continuation

    Ch 1 Chapter one - "Where the Hell am I?"
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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Commented

    Isekai'd**

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  • VasL
    VasL3yr
    Replied to Draken_Phenix

    I just finished writing it. Did you read it that fast?

    Ch 7 Porter
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