Smile_Kumar
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Smile_Kumar2hCommentednice
One by one, they undressed and entered one of the basins, actively rubbing themselves with the plant soap. While they were washing, a second group of Throsgen slaves entered the building. They were all women.- Smile_Kumar2hCommented
Knowledgeable would be better than learned
So what were the benefits of such a penalty? Jake only saw two. One, to make everyone understand the critical importance of Intelligence. Humans being arrogant, even idiots often thought they were right, never thinking they were inferior to those intellectuals who were more learned than they were. - Smile_Kumar3hCommented
thugs to mercenaries?
About twenty other prisoners were waiting to be disposed of in the midst of their waste. Most of them were still sleeping. By scrutinizing carefully, he finally recognized with great difficulty next to him Kyle and Yerode, the leader of the mercenaries. Why with difficulty? Because their appearances were somewhat different now. - Smile_Kumar3hCommented
Gladiator yea
[In this Ordeal, you will be one of those newly-captured Throsgen slaves. You await your fate in a dungeon of an Insula in the coastal city of Heliodas.] - Smile_Kumar1dCommented
cautiously! not suspiciously! It's a term you use when you suspect someone responsible for a action commited or going to commited. Here, the situation calls for these aliens to be cautious of each other. Looking at each other warily.
Now that the dunes had emptied, the most fearless aliens began marching towards the Red Cube. In a matter of minutes, thousands of aliens clustered around the huge structure, suspiciously staring at each other. - Smile_Kumar1dCommented
That sounded insane but not impossible.
At no time did he consider the possibility that someone might have bet everything on intelligence or perception. It was impossible and stupid. - Smile_Kumar1dCommented
He deduced in no time that this guy might have spent all aether points on his intelligence and perception.
At no time did he consider the possibility that someone might have bet everything on intelligence or perception. It was impossible and stupid. - Smile_Kumar1dCommented
you mean if his lowest stat was that high right?
If Jake had gotten an average Aether of 20 pts, with his highest stats at 120, he would have known that the guy was just a moron having invested everything in Strength. But if his highest stat was that low, then the man was dangerous. - Smile_Kumar1dCommented
Use secretly instead of unknowingly. It is confusing.
The truth was that after the first Ordeal, his Oracle rank had been promoted to Rank 4. With this promotion, the Aether scanner unlocked at rank 3 had expanded its range to 10 meters. When Kang Jun's scan attempt failed, Cho Min-Ho had crept up on them slightly, scanning Jake with his bracelet unknowingly. - Smile_Kumar1dCommented
so players are creatures who attempt the ordeal
By entrusting her safety to strangers, her life was flipped a coin. Aslael had insisted on it. The good Evolvers were respected, but those with the most prestige and privilege were certainly the Players. - Smile_Kumar4dCommented
Jake's criminal?Using Their enemy would have sufficed. This novel needs a good editor.
Finally, after 7 or 8 tents, Jake found an empty tent with Sophie and Loana naked and tied up, with several bruises and contusions. At first glance, nothing irreversible had happened to them yet. When they saw a man's silhouette entering the tent, they cried out in fright. As luck would have it, Jake's criminals had had the good bad idea to gag them. - Smile_Kumar4dCommented
Too much self contemplation
Since their arrival on B842, their guards had dealt with the most common dangers. Unfortunately, such a large group could be spotted from afar and was a real magnet for Digestors. In the course of their journey, they had faced entire hordes of these monsters and their numbers had been cut in half. - Smile_Kumar4dCommented
what business do you have here or what's your purpose coming here would have been better. What can I do for you my lady? Are you at her service or something.
"Halt!" Jake waved to stop ten feet away. "What can I do for you, my lady?" - Smile_Kumar4dCommented
author is feining silence. Not answering comments
If Amy's former coworkers could hear her thoughts, they'd probably vomit blood, including Kyle. Luckily, they were completely oblivious to all those morbid thoughts. - Smile_Kumar4dCommented
Twitched.
The creature twisted once, a mass of Aether appeared over its corpse and it was over. - Smile_Kumar5dCommented
again, why is he referring to him as a Playboy
"They haven't met a Digestor lvl2 like me, it seems. From the look on his face, I'd be surprised if this playboy could keep his cool against such a monster." Jake judged, turning his gaze to the other individuals... - Smile_Kumar5dCommented
playboy?
The group was a motley crew. Five men, six women, one child. One of the men, a rather athletic playboy, was about his height and wore a colt in his hand. The rest of the group seemed to crowd around him, seeking his protection. - Smile_Kumar5dReplied to eren1091
3 yrs and the still not edited
"Damn it, I'm on that damn planet for less than an hour and I'm already in bad shape." Jake sighed as he was taking a bite out of a high-protein bar to recharge his batteries. - Smile_Kumar5dCommented
dire better than darker
Unfortunately, although his ribs were not broken, they were painful, perhaps cracked. His chances against another monster like this one would be much darker. - Smile_Kumar5dCommented
Imagine as upgrade from Ben 10
However, while the aura of the Oracle Overseer was overwhelming, there was no hostility towards them. The latter was content to float calmly in his armchair, his tadpole head undulating calmly from right to left.