why is it always the good writers who go through issues?

you know I never expected guild Lori Lockhart to be outright evil but now that I look back makes sense

this is interesting. are you going to have him keep his normal personality or have him be slowly taken over by infinite. it's interesting concept. I'm not sure how far it will get for you only have two movies to base it off of but I can see this going really well so far it started off well good grammar decent descriptions and what has the obvious cliche start of truck kun it's basically tradition at this point so I don't really mind. hope to see more of this hope to see how our main character progresses

I didn't actually read this. I was just surprised to see a story named the power of Morgan Freeman.

it's far far to early in to rate this much higher than 4 stars but what you have started is promising I'm curious what dynamic you'll have between the characters and how Aaron will grow in both power and character. though honestly the name is a bit bland and not the best choice in my opinion. eggman would probably try to name him something egg-based at least. if not he would probably pick something like project ultimate or something cheesy like that. I mean just imagine if Shadow was instead named Steve... ain't a bad name by any measure. but a bit out of place. not mention, I'm a bit curious on how the powers will progress. he has a higher connection to the chaos emeralds that's obvious and the master emerald he has emerald bones are probably making it possible to break them. he probably has shadows supposed immortality. I mean like he won't age beyond his prime. still get killed but won't die of age or disease because again ultimately form was created to counter disease. you'll have shadows and sonic speed. mostly sonics because Shadow relies on his skates a bit. the chaos abilities which are really interesting chaos. spear chaos, blast and chaos control... considering his bones are made out of the emerald, I doubt he will need an actual emerald to use most. the abilities might need them to use them at full power, but you know still use them in limited fashion. oh yeah and he'll have knuckles and shadows added strength. and a freaking super form. and based on his dialogue in the second chapter, I'm guessing that he might have had either. someone else's soul put in him and remnants of it are allowing him to make references or he has some information downloaded from his creation because eggman probably would put some baseline information. he doesn't want to raise a baby of course. or third option That's the DNA of Sonic making his personality.

that patience apparently only had a span of about four seconds

I thought it would be only 20 or so at most ... but no you really put some thought into this didn't you.... I am impressed

I agree... the story is great... but the gramer is beyond atrocious

this is only so far but great job. well written things are grounded and the mc seems relatable so far I just wonder how mega evo is going to work . will he need the stone and a trainer or will it just be a power up state

this is a good story. it brings interesting ideas and it doesn't feel like it's leaving other characters behind like other fics I have to say the only thing that kinda irks me is how far your pushing the concept of space powers. I mean manipulating space energy to cut kurogiri. the rest is fine but that seemed a bit out their.

it's crap tbh Grammer sucks ass. and not in a fun Charming way. hard to follow and everything seems forced

oh yeah and add some more tags if you want to see more people look at it. I mean yeah too many tags would be a problem and it's starting out and all but I only found this by chance

for first fanfiction this is excellent quality, at least compared to a lot of others. but as a fanfiction in general it could use some improvement. pacing's fine and I get the first 15 or so chapters were more about him training and getting strong and I like the little twists that existed like the one with Bill was pretty smart. I'm not sure if that's how it would actually work out with his deals, but interesting nonetheless though changing his name a at 25 without truly any reason. while he already told his name to everybody else, canonically is even a whole part where Soos is having trouble pronouncing Luffy. might want to eventually go back and edit that but you have the base for something really good here at least so far maybe not something on the level of freaking Harry Potter, but something great nonetheless

this is an unexpected gem . well written faithful to the source and isn't a genuinely has some character depth ... considering there are so few sonic fics here it's a shame it is discontinued

well the first time it wasn't intentional every other time ... kinda

while I am also glad to know this isn't dropped I wonder when the next update is and I wonder how he will proceed

this is honestly something special the character development (so far) has been great the writing quality is top tier and the explanation and use of the ocs quirk is also great but so far the charherizatoin of the oc is the best its a perfect mix of genuine heroism and the soldiers patriotism

Konrad has returned haha

that honestly sounds like a fast food Halloween menu special

good God it was shino alla onh