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Stiven_Callejas2hCommented"Straightforward, rude," the ember at the end of my cigarette glowed stronger. "But her willpower and motivation are impressive."- Stiven_Callejas2hCommented
how annoying the cigarette really is, how unnecessary
"A sad fate for a bachelor," I just shook my head, exhaling a smoke ring. - Stiven_Callejas6hCommentedMiles's heart hammered against his chest as he attempted to interject, his words tumbling out in a desperate scramble. "Tanya, this isn't—"
- Stiven_Callejas1dCommented
ok, this is not right, literally already fan fics authors like to abandon their stories after 5 chapters, this change of personality is extremely unnecessary, too bad this story had potential but it was ruined like this.
Feeling more comfortable, I observed the changes, and it was clear as day what the system meant by an "altering of personality." The arrogance and the feeling to kill those I deemed maggots. It was oozing out of me, unlike my previous self that really just fought back in self-defense. The current me wanted to challenge anybody because I felt like it, not even worried about the consequences! - Stiven_Callejas1dReplied to batman_3_3_
yes and by far
Powerful attacks and they are unseen if you don't have the right perception. This path would save my life many times, especially if I keep this portion of my abilities secret. - Stiven_Callejas3dCommented
ah?
"Aku hanya mengatakan bahwa Natsukawa mengetahui tujuanmu, Hayato." - Stiven_Callejas3dCommented
XD
PS:I don't know if this is true because I searched and couldn't find it, so I skipped it :v - Stiven_Callejas3dCommented
yes
And tell me did i do the right thing to give him all the powers kf toji. Am going for an op portag. In thia fanfic. - Stiven_Callejas3dCommentedAverage Magic Ability : 0
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one of the worst one piece fan fic I've ever read, the MC is an annoying piece of shit, seriously how can you be so annoying? the only thing he does is literally put the story to sleep, he even prefers to keep the canon intact, it's just for decoration, the story has potential but the MC is unbearable, I don't think anyone can stand the story for more than 5 chapters.
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- Stiven_Callejas7dReplied to Mozuto
- Stiven_Callejas9dReplied to sewerslvtUnfortunately, Horikita Manabu didn't even spare a glance at Horikita Suzune. It was as if he didn't recognize the girl at all as he approached Hori.
- Stiven_Callejas9dCommented
how unnecessary it is to wear glasses
" Sunglasses? You want this? And not this?" He raised an eyebrow as he held up a toy and the sunglasses from the table. - Stiven_Callejas9dCommented
well, this was extremely unnecessary, why do you want them to hate your MC?
But the thing that bothered me was that my brown eyes turned to silver. I didn't mind since I could cover them with sunglasses to avoid unnecessary attention. - Stiven_Callejas9dCommented
what an annoying and disgusting way to give dialogue to a character, will the whole story be like this?
Saito:AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! - Stiven_Callejas11dReplied to Mrweepknight
strike the blood
AibaAsagi: "I'm 'CyberPrincess', so what should we do again?"