Pinkender, I have followed your stories in the site you were previously publishing at, and came here hoping that you will continue this story. I like how you developed the story and characters. You have left me hanging after reading the darker parts of the story. It was like riding a roller coaster of emotions, and now I have to be able to read the revenge part of it! I am looking forward to your next chapters.

Pinkender, congratulations. I haven’t enjoyed a fantasy story since I read Lord of the Rings some 30 yeras ago (obviously taking into consideration the difference in the spicyness of the stories). But what makes me enjoy both is the good story telling and character development, and you are doing a great job at that. It looks as if you are creating a saga (Viridian Vale Saga?), and I look forward to your next chapter.