Pinkender, congratulations. I haven’t enjoyed a fantasy story since I read Lord of the Rings some 30 yeras ago (obviously taking into consideration the difference in the spicyness of the stories). But what makes me enjoy both is the good story telling and character development, and you are doing a great job at that. It looks as if you are creating a saga (Viridian Vale Saga?), and I look forward to your next chapter.
OwenQuillin
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