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This is my 2nd review, I am loving this novel more and more. This novel has such great potential and an even greater author, I really respect that you upload daily and I am really grateful for it. BUT Author sama! PLEASE If you haven't Then please read {Pure love x insult complex} , cus if you know you know. And just for the right amount of Harem management and op character development try sneaking a peek at {Endless Path Infinite Cosmos EPIC}. Keep up the great work! And if you have already read 1 or both of them please tell me lol.
I am currently at ch. 156, (started reading 2 days ago). I actually like the novel, the beginning is top-notch, I really like the development with his new family and all, but I mean after ch. 100 the story is kind of hurried and there are some flaws here and there, but no problem we can cope with it. Some sub-plots left me kind of perplexed like when the engagement between Shirley and Davis is broken, and I was like: why? why you must do this to us author sama! And also the scene where Shirley is drugged with the aphrodisiac and Davis for no reason gets "angry" at her... cus he couldn't avoid the accident that happened to Evelynn, I mean come on it wasn't even her fault. Then all of a sudden we have the stepbrother of Davis, Evelynn is going to live in the castle and on top of that Davis is going to leave the 2nd layer... i don't mind this part of the story but I think it could have been raffined more with some more chapters. The part that made me suffer in all this is the way Davis behaves around potential love interests , I cant figure out if he is dense or the author just likes to play with our emotions. Anyway other than these little things, I really enjoyed the novel and its actually fun till now. I will write a full review when I get to the latest chapter. Thank you Stardust_Breaker!