Review Detail of Mehwar_S in Divine Emperor of Death

I am currently at ch. 156, (started reading 2 days ago). I actually like the novel, the beginning is top-notch, I really like the development with his new family and all, but I mean after ch. 100 the story is kind of hurried and there are some flaws here and there, but no problem we can cope with it. Some sub-plots left me kind of perplexed like when the engagement between Shirley and Davis is broken, and I was like: why? why you must do this to us author sama! And also the scene where Shirley is drugged with the aphrodisiac and Davis for no reason gets "angry" at her... cus he couldn't avoid the accident that happened to Evelynn, I mean come on it wasn't even her fault. Then all of a sudden we have the stepbrother of Davis, Evelynn is going to live in the castle and on top of that Davis is going to leave the 2nd layer... i don't mind this part of the story but I think it could have been raffined more with some more chapters. The part that made me suffer in all this is the way Davis behaves around potential love interests , I cant figure out if he is dense or the author just likes to play with our emotions. Anyway other than these little things, I really enjoyed the novel and its actually fun till now. I will write a full review when I get to the latest chapter. Thank you Stardust_Breaker!