Ah_thatgood

I just couldn't follow author... the story seems great but the writing is too blend. the writing is too close together and I couldn't follow.

IS THIS AUTHOR SICK??? WHERE IS THE UPDATE???

THIS AUTHOR BOOK UPDATE REALLY SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

moreover, for your information, this novel has a different cultivation system compared to others on this platform. First there the mortal world cultivation system and then the nine heaven immortal cultivation system which is not totally clear because naming is all over the place as everyone seems to free immortal but there were 2 types of free immortals either way even cultivation system about nine heaven immortal cultivation is a mess too. there needs to be a list of all the cultivation systems in a correct order with correct names so people can infer to it. I hope this clarifies my words to you.

how many chapters have you read... the world background is not totally clear as in the continents and places name keep changing. the cultivation system is also a mess as everyone is free immortal, and the cultivation realm is not totally clear, which is very confusing. the story is good, but execution is so very bad. I'm still reading this nonsense because I'm bored, and I haven't found anything more interesting to read on this damn app. JUST A VERY WASTE OF MONEY!!!!

I CAN'T RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL FOR MANY MANY REASONS.... Firstly, the world background is just all over the place. Couldn't get a clear picture of this world design, and the cultivation realm system is all over the place. The worst part of all is the translation; the translation is just all over the place... This novel is not bad when it comes to the story, but the terrible cultivation system and inadequate world background with very very very bad translations make it hard for me to continue. This shouldn't be happening, considering I had to spend a lot of money to read. TRULY VERY SAD!!!

if he is 21, who are his nieces' parents? and if his parents are also grandparent, what happened to his older siblings or the parent of the nieces. I feel like they are more of a cousin than nieces. please get it right. It's confusing

how old are these nieces if him and his brother are 21 years old. it says they are both going to universities

siblings would have been better

come on, author. please don't be like other authors who like to play mind game with their audience. they just came to life. so why "always "