I like the story's concept and world building. So far, the characters introduced appear to have very different motivations and thoughts regarding the conflict of Magic vs Tech and the appearance of the new mysterious school. Vocabulary-wise, the story may require some improvement. Aside from that I do think that there's potential in this story so do give it a try :)

So far so good! I'd describe the story pace as slow but in a good way. We gradually get to see and understand the world the MC lives in without any excessive background information. I'm rather curious as to how some characters are related to the MC and his past. Very excited to see what lies ahead the MC's journey! On a side note, there are some repetitive sentence structure but that shouldn't affect the reading experience much. Give this a story a chance, it won't disappoint!