This paragraph is pretty much wrong/unnecessary, the situation is taken out of context, and you're comparing your fic to canon material whereas in your fic the path of development is clearly different from Canon, anyway, just don't throw free hate for no reason, this doesn't add anything to the plot and actually breaks immersion.

That was a little bit too much I think.

Nah, he might evolve into Primehuman doing that ashahsuhaush

I think you should make her more relevant, as a trainer, she should actually be training the pokemon as well, just hoping on the easy train doesn't make her a good trainer. Besides, making her struggle and face challenges would be a good way to improve her character, be it as one of the main characters of your story, or simply as any other character, it would also make her feel more real. Especially so, if you make her become more mature with time, in a sense of growing up, becoming more responsible, etc.

Plothole here author, you probably meant Lexy since he never said his real name.

Find an Arceus stone then, imagine an evee evolving to god type

That was very well written, I'm honestly surprised by the quality.

That's some Planet of the apes shit going on here, french revolution but with pokemons

Alright, thankfully I didn't give up on the first chapters, you have talent Mr. Author, keep doing what you're doing, it's working very well.

It makes sense though, he can spit fire, why not spit hot air?

Must have had his soul consumed by fire, it's overkill to use this move against such a creature.

I feel like he's actually the one selecting his starter human, very unexpected, but I still believe it would have been better to see him going from lvl 5 to god knows how far a pokemon can go in this fic.

Okay, so everyone is a Jedi, I'm sorry, I'm definitely disappointed by this sort of explanation, it's very lazy.

Not gonna lie, I thought you were talking of something else, but then I read again and understood. No matter the criticism, this is definitely more interesting than him being alone, there isn't much to be explored of this world as a pokemon usually, him being with someone will expand the range of possibilities.

What? Is he a Jedi that mastered beast friendship? Please, at least explain to us later why he can understand Dragonite.

My dude, Idk what your objective is, for the moment the only promise you made based on what was written, is that he will fight stronger pokemon (meaning they do exist) and that maybe, just maybe, this girl will be his pokemon 'trainer', partner, whatever. What I'm trying to say is that this doesn't look very exciting for a variety of reasons, it feels like this will be only battles after battles story, Idk if that's really the case, but if it is, I suggest you try and add some other themes into your story, be it mystery, war, a good vs evil plot, whatever, anything works so long as you don't focus only on battles.

I'm trying to actually imagine what story will be told, because well if he ain't partner up with someone, will he travel around and just challenge stronger pokemon? That would be very boring.

He's annoying so far, not a very likable or relatable main character.

You know, that's kind of stupid, if there is any other pokemon who trained so much, wouldn't he eventually achieve the so called true *insert type here* and then be much stronger than usual as well?

If I use a lvl 999 Bulbasaur with perfect IV and the impossible 252 EV for every status because the game doesn't allow this. His attributes would be like this considering that he has the following abilities and Adamant nature: Accuracy Expert Attack Expert SpAttack Expert HP 734 ATTACK 652 DEFENSE 494 SPATTACK 621 SPDEFENSE 576 SPEED 474 TOTAL 3551 This was calculated using pokemon pets stats calculator.