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Christian_Lindahl1mthCommentedinflation?
I managed to convince my mother to implement few other plans and it's still a work in progress so more about 3/4 of our gold was gone but we started to see the increase in revenue. It was like throwing away gold!- Christian_Lindahl1mthCommented
I know i'm late to the party, but isn't House Ryswell famous for their Horses?
Maybe I should start breading horses? Chargers and Coursers would be perfect for our future cavalry and a Destrier stallion and Palfrey for me would be great! No, no ,no. Now's not the time. - Christian_Lindahl3mthCommented
other way around would be better imo
Ethan ordered William to distribute 1 silver to each deceased soldier's family, and for the surviving soldiers to get 5 silver each for their efforts. It must be noted that 30 copper coins is enough for a family of 5 to survive 2 months. As Ethan gave the order his heart ached at the sight of his money dwindling, thinking about their already poor reserves. - Christian_Lindahl6mthPosted
Thank you, this story is truly worth reading and the world you have built is fascinating. The idea for the skilled, the use of minions, the expansion of lore and canon abilities into something unique is just marvelous. Thank you for giving me the this chance to once again become fascinated with the world of Nirn and the Elder Scrolls-Verse.
- Christian_Lindahl6mthCommented
he could, you know donate, anonymously, to the orphanage so they all could have better life
After a short conversation, the Matron leaves Tom to rest and recuperate. Tom looks at the disgusting slop that was brought to him and sneers. The food somehow had the effect of scaring away his hunger. There's no way he's eating this cr*p anymore, not when he has Mimsy to get him some edible food. No, not just edible, but delicious food. He then sends Mimsy to a nearby restaurant to steal him some food. The food the Matron brought was swiftly zapped into nothingness by elf magic. - Christian_Lindahl6mthCommented
would be smarter to just have Slytherin, to much attention otherwise
"No, I would rather stay low profile, for now, thanks." Tom denies Alluk immediately. "I'll take the Slytherin, Le Fay, and Pendragon rings. Leave the Gaunt one where it was for now. No need to bother old uncle Morfin just yet." Tom says with a bloodthirsty smile. - Christian_Lindahl10mthCommented
Mark Shelby, Older Brother of Thomas Shelby.
[Blessing of passion: individuals blessed by this Mark Shelby bestowed upon more refined bodies quick reflexes and better refine skills mark's power depends on the favor the mortal individual has to the God in question] - Christian_Lindahl10mthReplied to Christian_Lindahl
As someone else already stated, you can just use grammarly, or now ChatAi for this.
[Hello host this is the warp system A tool for you to use to help you on your journey and exchange for such a gift we request to gather data and by accepting this you accept every fiber of your being scanned studied in research for further systems we thank you for your cooperation] - Christian_Lindahl10mthCommented
"Hello Host, this is the warp system. A tool for you to use and to help you on your journey. In exchange for such a gift we request that you gather data for us. By accepting this you also accept that every fiber of your being will be scanned and studied, for further research on the applications of the system. We thank you for cooperation." An example of how it could look like. Don't get me wrong, it is a good story so far but it helps us readers if you use punctuations.
[Hello host this is the warp system A tool for you to use to help you on your journey and exchange for such a gift we request to gather data and by accepting this you accept every fiber of your being scanned studied in research for further systems we thank you for your cooperation] - Christian_Lindahl10mthReplied to Zebulon_Senatore
Umbers aren't among the most powerful houses in the North, those are Karstarks, Mandarly's, Boltons and the Starks.
House Stark had around nine thousand soldiers, being the most prominent military power in the north, the Boltons were a close second with approximately seven thousand soldiers, followed by the Karstark that had around six thousand soldiers. - Christian_Lindahl10mthCommented
Honestly, that is a bit of a thing with how people write Medieval worlds. While nobles could sometimes be married early (in certain instances) they most often didn't sleep or marry officially until they were old teenagers or young adults. People knew it was dangerous to impregnate someone too young and people valued blood and the possibility of a healthy heir above that of a few years earlier dead heir and dead wife...
I was still incredibly uncomfortable with the idea of marrying someone under eighteen, but it was common for women to marry between the ages of twelve and sixteen in Westeros. - Christian_Lindahl10mthReplied to Jibberflex
give or take a few decades...
I even upgraded the old wooden castle we had to a fortress, it was still in progress, but it was getting there. - Christian_Lindahl11mthCommented
bit off a difference between bullying and raping someone...
Jack was dumbfounded and impressed at the same time hearing the stream of invective that came out of Bowler. This guy had acted rather timid and polite until now. Jack didn't expect he could explode like this just from seeing that girl getting bullied. - Christian_Lindahl11mthCommented
wouldn't it be better with a population in the millions and a 1:250 ratio?
If his mother become Martial Grandmaster then she would have a status in the Dark Rigel Kingdom because there were only thousands of Martial Grandmasters in the kingdom out of one hundred thousand population. - Christian_Lindahl11mthReplied to TyrTheFallen
Good idea
Everything is going well maybe hopefully but I don't know what the future holds. But my family is now my strength and weakness. I know that nobody can truly harm me but if there clever then they will go for them instead. That's why I need to earn my own land and place that I could use as a base of operation. - Christian_Lindahl11mthCommented
interesting, but why not just make it that he had another vision, and that is the price he has to pain for these visions.
I sigh once more while putting my arms down and letting a look of deep depression seep across my face, "My meeting with Ralof and Ulfric was no accident... I'm the sole survivor of a far-off nomadic clan of divinators... I was blessed with future sight greater than that of my kinsmen. I told them of Ulfric's ambush and the greater plights of Skyrim and how they could direct the fate of Tamriel… We fought our way from distant lands, until finally, I had reached the border... But I was the last of my clan, the rest are dead or scattered to the winds... I'm sorry if I scared you and your family Gerdur, but you don't live through the death of your clan without scars. I understand if you need me to leave your home and seek lodging at the inn, thank you for your hospitality so far." I say making my way towards the door with a stoic expression. - Christian_Lindahl11mthCommented
do you mean the "west coast"?
I acknowledge her warning, it is honestly surprising how little people know of what Balon Greyjoy is planning, it may just seem like I'm saying that because I know he will rebel this year, but he has been far from subtle about it. Castles and fortresses along the east coast haven't bolstered their defences or prepared for any potential attack, at least from what our spies have been saying. Both of our spy networks had grown massively over the years, though Alysanne's was the better connected and larger one. I wasn't as much time as I wanted improving my network due to all the projects I've had over the years, but it was effective and thoroughly spread throughout the Westerlands, whereas Alysanne focused on the Seven Kingdoms as a whole. - Christian_Lindahl11mthCommented
most estimates puts the population of the Westerlands at around 3-4.5 million and the entire Seven kingdoms at 40-45 million. I would recommend increasing the population in your story.
The Westerlands are not the most largest, populous or fertile of the realm. However there were around 782,000 people living in the Westerlands twenty years ago, nowadays that number will be much higher, I asked Maester Creylen on what he thought it would be as an estimate and he said it would most likely be around 800,000 or around that number. With most of the population living in the far West, in the more flatlands, about a 1/5 need food in order to not starve as they live in the more mountainous regions. - Christian_Lindahl11mthCommented
you are truly underestimating the sheer size of westeros and the North, or overestimating how fast armies moved in those times. It take weeks to travel from winterfell to the neck, and that is less of a distance than the entire Western coast of the North. Don't get me wrong, I really like this story, however u hope you can edit this in the future to make sense.
This place, where they set up camp, was chosen with careful consideration in Winterfell. It had the unique property of being in the middle of North's coastal region, which made almost all of the village accessible from here in a reasonable time. Even the farthest fishing village would only take about one and a half days for them to reach if they tried their hardest. - Christian_Lindahl11mthCommented
only problem I see with this is that that the western coast of the North is basically the same length as of the coast of one fourth of South America. With Westeros itself being nearly the size of south America and the North is one third of Westeros.
"I already showed you how I warg into Frost," Jon said calmly, "And she is really fast so it would be very easy for her to patrol a very large area. She would be able any ship long before they even come close to the coast,"